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Malefic 5 71.43%
ProVerse 2 28.57%
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Old 09-15-04, 07:42 PM   #1
Kawn Flixx
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ProVerse vs Malefic

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Old 09-15-04, 07:44 PM   #2
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Malefic has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-15-04 07:44 PM.
 
Old 09-16-04, 07:28 PM   #3
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ProVerse has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-16-04 07:28 PM.
 
Old 09-17-04, 12:33 PM   #4
Malefic
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You may be 'From', But you flow witta wack state of mind-
Facing me? Only way you get up is if we record an rewind
I had to status decline, jus to endure this "oooo enducer"
Proverse deals wit more cock...than 4 red headed rooster's-
They say you can't judge by a record, But this time its true....
Cus I'll be honest....your worste than that empire dude-
Disconnected....from reality,'verse'can't catch a dial-tone..
Dazed,Confused-n-bruis'd like ur avatar...pickin ur dome!
If you wanted to stand chance..Pro...U shoulda posted first-
Ur better off takin 2,000 RV and puttin shadow-n-mask on ur verse
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Old 09-17-04, 07:48 PM   #5
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*'s mean an explination is due

[FONT=Palatino Linotype].::the only good lines I "spot" is the "spot" in your empty spaces ::.
.::maybe you should erase it all and it will malefix your verse's bases::.
.::your lines have no bounderies like the hatians demonstratins::.
.::you're a MALEFICtion character with "fake" lines as a inspiration::.
.::how you have a black name but freinds with a racist?...you're spacious::.

.::your punches "draw" no "clarity" flow is up and down like a "bridge"::.
.::all of your punchlines are scrambled and confusing like your sig::.
.::swallow the loss and spit, and it doesn't change Hue::.
.::maybe it's becaused you and losses have had previous disputes::.(battles)
.::all your rhymes predictable like the pictures appearing on a movie reel::.[/FONT


(your punches "draw" no "clarity" flow is up and down like a "bridge"::.
draw=cards--bridge=a card game)

(.::maybe you should erase it all and it will malefix your verse's bases::.
malefic was a haitian man on MASH which was on a base)

(.::all of your punchlines are scrambled and confusing like your sig::.
his sig is scrambled and confusing-you'll see after the battle )


that's all me

vote on this me or FIC'll return the favor
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Old 09-17-04, 07:54 PM   #6
Abraxas
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Voted For: Malefic

very great verse both of you and both had nice drops overall

Proverse: ya lnies were good nice line good drop overall but ya lines were a lil too stretched and out you got the multis thoguh but it really didnt help ya punches were iight it was ok and ya personals were good but you really didnt have to put explaining that much cos it ruined a rappers real skill and shit umm you had ok strucutre thoguh ya lnie flowed well... nice drop

Malefic: ya verse was good nice drop nice verse overall ya had the punches it was really good and some were funny and really original ya had some ok personals but ya structre was good overall and your lines and verse flowed well... both were good

Vote Malefic becuasse he had stronger punches

proverse could have won if he had more stronger punches and if he had less explaining
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Old 09-17-04, 07:59 PM   #7
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Voted For: ProVerse

yo pro i think u took it here dawg malefic dont even makes sense yo
give me your opinion on my battle its still open
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Old 09-17-04, 08:00 PM   #8
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god damn it wasn't explained

somebody ELSE vote
but thanx anyway
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Old 09-17-04, 08:00 PM   #9
Abraxas
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Lol That Shudnt Count You Have To Put More Explaining That That
And If You Dont Understand It Then Dont Vote
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Old 09-17-04, 09:00 PM   #10
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Old 09-18-04, 01:34 AM   #11
Parallel
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Voted For: ProVerse

yer unbalivable i jsut couldent see threw thos punches man i guess ima hafe to vote for you man heres what i came out with haha:
punches: proverse
vocab: Pro
wordplay: for sure Pro
metas: pro
multi's: Pro
stucture: Pro
flow: no need for this in text
openers: Pro
closeners: Pro
vote: ProVerse
return the favour honestly in my battle verse nutz b the links in ma sig thanks peace

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Old 09-18-04, 01:37 AM   #12
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^thanx for voting
uppin for more

i'll return the favor HONESTLY now
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Old 09-18-04, 05:37 AM   #13
Malefic
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Uppin
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Old 09-18-04, 02:44 PM   #14
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Voted For: Malefic

ok battle

punches- male
personals- verse
multis- male
metas- verse
word play- verse
flow- male

Male u had more punches and better flow. try more personals.

Verse u had ok word play, and ok personals. Try more punches though. Multis help 2

Male:
"If you wanted to stand chance..Pro...U shoulda posted first-
Ur better off takin 2,000 RV and puttin shadow-n-mask on ur verse" ok closer.

verse:
".::your punches "draw" no "clarity" flow is up and down like a "bridge"::.
.::all of your punchlines are scrambled and confusing like your sig::." ok personal.

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Old 09-18-04, 04:02 PM   #15
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Every line a had a personal fool....Uppin ne ways.....-1
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