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Old 12-04-05, 08:33 AM   #1
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Old 12-11-05, 12:02 AM   #2
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im goin through a mental spazz near christmas
it got me seein metal catz starring at fishes
lookin just as vicous as me tryin ta spit this
it just cannot get 'em whole without a fishin pole
so i dont know what its lookin at fishin books for
when it aint able ta get fish off of the damn table
it must just not really be that mentally stable
it bout ta give these fishes a stroke, thanks alot strobe
ima kill myself over this wack shit i just wrote
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Old 12-14-05, 12:26 PM   #3
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What Is The Point In Doing This If No One Even Tries To Choose A Reason.......
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Old 12-20-05, 01:56 AM   #4
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Originally Posted by Ill Technique
What Is The Point In Doing This If No One Even Tries To Choose A Reason.......

cuz its fun ta do by urself who cares if no ones sees it
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Old 12-22-05, 09:18 PM   #5
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Good time we have had over the years...
Over friendship in the mids of disappear...
Who would have guessed the best thing I did was to meet you...
It is true what they say, life is unpredictable and surprises you every day...
We have many things to look forward to...
Soon to be the awesome 3...
Thank your my friends... great things do come in three's
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Old 12-23-05, 10:40 PM   #6
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look at us, in our confined little world
everything past this glass is so seductive
and at the same time seductive
how i long to travel to the open seas
because of the stories my parents told
when they spoke to me
i feel so cornered, this dome prison
coming up once a day, for food
twitching once in a while
to prove im still alive
you know you're defenseless
when you are being studied
and hunted by the lifeless

ick...its been a while.

do your research.

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Old 12-27-05, 03:41 PM   #7
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Man is truly fucked.
His greed consumes
The fragile waters of
A lovers tear with lust.

God weeps for him,
As the Devil sings
In delight of the catch.

The bate so beautiful,
The purest of all souls
Could never has passed.

Mans sin: his downfall.
Gods fresh air falls
bare and stale to ground.
The pungent fragrance
Just isn't tolerable.
Into water dives the mans
Disapproving soul.

And there he sits,
For eternity. A hard breath
Graces once for his
Each and ever regret.

There he drifts forever.
Living in a thought
Of pasts thin tether.

Except that now before
Every action he acted
Upon once before...

He sees only the devil,
Standing firm between
Him and virtue's nestle,

Piercing a lack of care
With the jagged stare of metal.

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Old 01-01-06, 04:47 PM   #8
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^Dope ish man.......
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Old 01-02-06, 12:48 AM   #9
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I Stepped Forth, Stood Tall
Struck Dead Center An' Shied
Began To Fall, Forever Tried
Yet Not Enough, It Ends Now
Pretend Thou ... Art's Vows
Inriched Deeply To Arched Brows
March Proud As We Watch Out
The Illusion Speaks It's Heart Loud
Mock The Crowd's Faulted Shrouds
As The Cat Jumps Over, And Over
Shoulders The Boulder, Learns Anew
Repeatedly Seated On The Front Pew
Months Flew, His View Never Altered
New He'd Lose If His Poise Faultered
Metalic Prospers So His Talents Offered
He's Finally Conquered The Slaughtered
Sundered And Bothered Under The Water
Father To Daughter? He Robbed Her Fruit
Now The Artist's Paints On Canvas His Flukes
Blow It - Topical

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The unexamined life is not worth living.
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