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08-04-06, 04:32 PM
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"Contend For The Faith"
IP: B08B 609B
I'm back on RV with a new track. It's called "Contend for the Faith" The beat is by Apex Productions who always supplies us with really good beats.
its on my soundclick www.soundclick.com/implicitus Here are my links http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=2811567 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232823 If you leave feedback, leave a link also and I'll get you back |
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08-04-06, 04:51 PM
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Ike
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IP: 3C6E F2D8
o shit...implicit..havent talked to u in a while homeboy....
lemme take a listen at this... beat is pretty ill....its mixed kinda weird... delivery got better....quality is about the same...the beginning was mixed way too low.... some of the dubs are off in a couple places...hook is coo...dubs again are off a bit... overall...coo song.....keep postin foo....
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08-04-06, 04:55 PM
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IP: B08B 609B
oh damn what up?
yeah im bout to fix those dubs right now. thank for the feed. get at me on AIM. |
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08-06-06, 10:15 PM
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Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: 6A24 77A2
alright since everyone else is sleeping
cool beat heard ppl use it a few times your coming through kinda quiet in the hook sounds like you mumbled a little bit but its ok delivery is kind of lacking lyrics are pretty good flow is basically on throughout the wholoe track only really negative thing i notice ios you kind of mumble alot lyrically track was hot love the kid in the back of the hook props
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08-07-06, 02:07 AM
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IP: B08B 609B
haha. yeah my little cousin was up with me the whole time at like 2 in the morning so i had to put him on. thanks for the feed though. i'll take it into consideration.
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08-09-06, 03:29 AM
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IP: B08B 609B
let me get some more feedback. if u leave links i'll return the feed
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08-10-06, 06:46 PM
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IP: B08B 609B
ayo im still tryna get some more feed so i can better myself. if u want, i'll leave feed on your songs too
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08-11-06, 02:25 PM
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I'm Talented.Period.
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IP: 2B7A 2084
RTF please on "Satan's Devices"
*listening* lead-in could use an intro...talking/skit...ad libs or something to build up your entry Your verse starts out of no where The vocals seem a touch low like ur voice on track nice rhyming lyrics are well written I liked this. Slick 1 |
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08-12-06, 03:53 AM
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-BTR-
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IP: B08B 609B
thanks for the feed. i'll definitely return the feed on your song
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08-12-06, 06:32 AM
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...Closer Look...
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IP: 335E FE56
listening
the beat is cool..i'm feeling it u got a cool voice but i fel ur vocals shuda been a lil more higher hook is...idk..flow was lacking a lil..idk..the second voice was slower...idk the flow on it was off but i liked the kids voice on that.nice move ...yeah as 4 ur verses..i mut say u had cool lyrics...kinna religious..cool cool ...u had a nice and steady flow too,delivery was so-so,shud have put just a lil more emotionon this or lemme say a lil more volume...lol i cud catch most of ya words yeah but for the def fucks! ....decent smooth track...nice hit my sig
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08-13-06, 02:52 AM
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-BTR-
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IP: B08B 609B
thanks for the feed. ima check out the songs now..
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08-15-06, 01:43 AM
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IP: 8ED9 C2CD
and i hit the links that you all left. so leave some more feed
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08-15-06, 06:10 AM
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I'm Talented.Period.
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IP: 2B7A 2084
^^U ain't hit my link
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08-15-06, 08:19 AM
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I Smacc Booty Emcee's
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IP: 0775 E664
i like this beat.
Yo, im feelin this track, The lyrics are on a positive tip. Thats good On that Part. Something sounds distorted in your vocals though. it might be your adlibs. I dont know. But still this tracks pretty nice. Your flow is ok, cool for this kind of track. But im likin the concept. Its a good shit. I like listening to shit i wouldnt really do. So this is a nice joint. Your mic delivery is Cool. Nothing too good. but hey, can't be screaming on this kind of track right? so yeah its good. Pressence is good. And your delivery is Nice. overall 7/10
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08-15-06, 12:16 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: C7F6 C148
Listen'n....
Beat.......egh lol its okay... Nice intro... 1st: Nice presence nice delivery, real kid talkin to god..like that shit..real deep lyrics like that strong point. HOok: Contend for the faith like that...Dope wit the kids mixed in it 2nd: Openin' hot man bout jeramiah....better than the first lyrics was sickin'n on this one... HOok: Same Over-all Dont c anything i can say that was honestly wrong wit the track...u had nice delivery good presence...real good track kid like'd the whole concept "Contend For faith" dope man...mixin' was on point for the most part all though it did fall off on some parts....my ratin' 9/10 keep it 100 an holla back 
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