Suicide

[intro]
yo…I just want…every motherfucking body…to understand...the pain...of losing a friend...and I want...everybody...to know...I have felt the pain...and still feel it...and i wanna tell yáll...i didn’t give a fuck...when my grandpa...jumped...under a train...and I think that...the driver of that train...is a hero...haha...yo

[verse 1]
have you ever felt how fucked up it is to have a friend killing himself/
and if you hear the only thing you want is blow everybody away with a couple off shells/
i keep spittin shit for my dawgs straight outta my motherfuckin soul/
to all my dead homie’s...rest in peace y’all/
but to my mom’s father...burn in fuckin hell faggot/
I wouldn’t even EAT ya, if I was a hungry maggot/
But I’m human if you know what that means hoe/
I don’t wanna be family of this fucking homo/
I you was still alive I would’ve beat yo brain out on the flo/
But did I want you to kill yourself?...NO/
I wanted myself to kill ya bitch, with my bare hands yo/

[chorus]
(suicide) what would you do when your friend just died/
(suicide) what would you do when your grandpa’s dead and you think it’s aight/
(suicide) what would you do when your grandpa hates you , fight?/
(suicide) what would you do when your parents found out you lied/

[verse 2]
I wasn’t on your funeral you worthless motherfucker, cuz there was no funeral and I had too much fun/
Yo faggot-ass can I ask you how many of your children love you? That’s an easy question...none/
Yeah, we all hate you, period, done/
Let’s talk about one of my friends that killed himself too/
Not that I’m gonna diss HIM, he’s koo, peace to you!/
Thirteen years old he was, didn’t know what the futer might bring, not telling the truth/
You could have been here still/
But now my stomach and head are spinnin like a windmill/
What was your fuckin reason to kill/ (yourself)
I admitt I cried for u a while and had some pills/
Even though you’re not here anymore, I still got respect for you, you’re ill/

[chorus]
(suicide) what would you do when your friend just died/
(suicide) what would you do when your grandpa’s dead and you think it’s aight/
(suicide) what would you do when your grandpa hates you , fight?/
(suicide) what would you do when your parents found out you lied/



[verse 3]
suicide is a fucked up thing, G/
peeps don’t think twice for they jump,cut,bleed, or shoot and feel the heat/
i had suicidal tendeeys a couple of times, but I thought homie!/
and it worked cuz I’m still here as you can probably see/
too bad it doesn’t work for everybody, cuz it’s just fucked up if you go to school and peeps ask, sup?/
and that you’ve gotta answer that you feel fucked-up/
and tell that a friend killed himself and they ask, what?/
if I cried they laughed cuz they never felt the pain dawg/
they’re livin a good life whit happy parents and shit, fuck/
and I told these little mothafuckas, what would do if your friend just died/
bitch nigga...you allso would’ve cried/

[chorus]
(suicide) what would you do when your friend just died/
(suicide) what would you do when your grandpa’s dead and you think it’s aight/
(suicide) what would you do when your grandpa hates you , fight?/
(suicide) what would you do when your parents found out you lied/
(what?)
(suicide) what would you do when your friend just died/
(suicide) what would you do when your grandpa’s dead and you think it’s aight/
(suicide) what would you do when your grandpa hates you , fight?/
(suicide) what would you do when your parents found out you lied/
(once again)
(suicide) what would you do when your friend just died/
(suicide) what would you do when your grandpa’s dead and you think it’s aight/
(suicide) what would you do when your grandpa hates you , fight?/
(suicide) what would you do when your parents found out you lied/
(yeah)

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o yeah forgot the votes:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...4760#post884760

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...4318#post884318

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...4736#post884736
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uppin

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damn that shit was deep as hell,
and i think i know how you feel cuz my brother killed himself
over shit .... i rate that shit 9/10

yo dawg som tight shit aiight ill give a 5/5 for everything dawg that shit was awesome.


Aiight Peace (v)....{/]~{UsKi}~[\

thanx y'all...

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wow. this was the best fucking open mic i've seen in a long time. i think real talent is here. i hate that line in verse three though. too bad it doesn’t work for everybody, cuz it’s just fucked up if you go to school and peeps ask, sup?/
Maybe you should make it a little shorter. Truthfully, this sounds like an Em song, which is cool. it could actually be produced.

good topic... but your hook kinda went astray... other than
that.. you stayed on course pretty well... Im liking the emotion
you put forth into this... keep droppin... this was a good peice...
soon, you'll be one of the top open mic heads in here...
~AshY~

could u reply to mine?

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i can relate to dis one. good job.

deeper than lil kim would take down her throat (as I say)
good concept an one thing you managed to do is make people feel like a relative to your work which in somewhat is hard to pull off... good read... good idea... structured rather well

= good post

deeper than lil kim would take down her throat (as I say)
^haha...lol

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Nice, liked the emotional input, other than that 3/5 it was alrite Peace (produce it? rite) Peace

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