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Old 07-14-04, 10:55 PM   #1
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Finally Home.... (War)

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This nigga name George got me fightin’ another man’s war
What is this for? You get kicks watchin other men’s gore
It’s ok, It’s me and you, you got my back, I’m got yours
Let’s split the flank in fours and ambush these Arabian whores
Ya family’s minding their business then hear a knock on the door
“I’m sorry Sir/Ma’am your loved one was just lost in the war
It’s hot, don’t have no food, it’s like I’m livin’ in hell
Can’t hardly take a good piss, without duckin’ from shells
What you know about no sleep, standin’ on guard for hours
Bodies stinkin’ goin’ days and weeks without takin’ a shower
They were so happy, they did their time, and was on the way home
Took off in the air’ not even 30min’s and their choppa was blown
Bombs flyin’, mines blastin, grippin’ on to this gun I’m holdin’
In the town, life on the line, worryin’ about cars explodin’
You got it good, in ya Hummer joy ridin’ cruisin’ tha block
I’m rollin’ through sand, in tha dessert duckin from shots
It’s four of us, six of them, we gotta fight our way out
I took out two, one in the head, and shot one in the mouth
Most of the shit on the news is fake, puttin’ nonsense in ya dome
Who are they to tell the story…Fuck it…I’m just glad that I’m Finally home
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Old 07-15-04, 10:47 PM   #2
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uppin 4 feedback
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Old 07-15-04, 10:49 PM   #3
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now that shit was crazy, im feeling that fo show man
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Old 07-15-04, 10:56 PM   #4
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is you a soldier fa real dawg, if you is then much respect man. i watched farenheit 911 and i seen how they had yall livin over there, some fucked up shit, all ova oil. and republicans still blind as shit and cant see past the wool ova there eyes. feelin the spit dawg, niggas need to know what soldiers goin through over there for no fuckin reason other than oil
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Old 07-15-04, 10:59 PM   #5
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thanks to both...yeah I am a soldier in tha Army...It's wild over there..half the niggas tryin to thug on the street wouldn't survie over there
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Old 07-16-04, 09:20 AM   #6
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uppin for some more feedback plz
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Old 07-17-04, 05:46 PM   #7
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Old 07-19-04, 01:56 AM   #8
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yo...that was deep mane...i got a friend over there right now...he writes me and tells me about all the shit hes goin through...i got so much respsct for ya cuz...do wat u do...yall dont get enough respect...so whoever hatin the soldiers...u need to take a look at what there doin to save ure ass...as well as other...
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Old 08-01-04, 09:44 PM   #9
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I know what you mean homie... I'm doing a bid out here in Iraq right now. I've seen some crazy shit out here... but I've heard about a lot worse than what I've actually had to see or go through. We almost lost someone in our unit to an IED (improvised explosive device for those who don't know). He lost some hearing in one ear and was lucky to have the shrapnel stop at the collar of his flak vest. so yeah... i feel ya man. i gotta family to get back to... wife and kids, ya know. Just can't wait to get back.
Yo, on the real... keep in touch man. Us "true vets" gotta stick together... this rap shyt is secondary.
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Old 08-01-04, 10:05 PM   #10
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no doubt...I feel u man, over there u got nobody but ur boys in your unit to watch ya back.
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Old 08-01-04, 10:55 PM   #11
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im feelin that.. concept i liked it and flow was good... tho i gotta say this...

I Know Mad People Got Deep Feelings Bout Bush Cuz Of The War, But Regardless If It Was Bush Or Not, Say If It Was Gore', And He Didnt Go To War, Than Terrorist Would Have Done It Agian, Or If He Did People Would Hate Him Just The Same, I Respect Bush Cuz When The Heat Was On He Didnt Bitch Up You Know, Yea Lives Were Lost And Everyone Got A Right To Be Upset, But 9/11 Caused Many Lives To Be Lost, Imagine If He Didnt Go To War How Many Other Tragidy's Like This Would Have Happend You Know, Lives Were Lost In The War, But Many More Were Saved Because Of It, But Sorry To Turn Ya Thread Offtopic, But I Jus Had To Say That

Anyway Nice Drop I Was Feelin It
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Old 08-02-04, 06:38 AM   #12
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huh what you lost me sry you dont know nuttin
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Old 08-03-04, 07:37 AM   #13
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Shit dawg I gotta hand it to ya.
Thas a gud ryme respect 2 ya'll n tha soldjaz out ther rite now.
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