Battle Rules:

10-12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

3-0=K.O
5 votes to win

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-10-05 at 09:09 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

Win by 3-0 KO

BIG Spook has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-08-05 09:11 PM.

AckRite has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-08-05 09:30 PM.

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i drop lines on AckRite like its money
im so sick my game even got me his honey
my lines are so fresh it aint even funny
why did you accept this battle you must be a dummy
this verse go past ya like a Marshall Faulk juke
come on~ this rap is posted by ya boy BIG Spook
I dont know why ya call yourself AckRite
all those wins were won against a pussy~is that right?
im all up in ya grill and im just a lil kid(14yrs old)
i saw some verses on ebay you might wanna bid
i aint even tryin to win this battle cuz i know im da best
so imma give you my verse and let you finish da rest


1.Honey=his girl
2.Marshall Faulk=NFL running back(Rams)
3.Ebay=auctions(obviously)
4.~=pause

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BIG SpookBIG SpookBIG Spook

Aeyo LOL Uppin This Shit For Some Votes Niggas.....$cream At It

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Voted For: AckRite

Easy,

ackrite had nicer punches and a lot better personals with actual decent concepts, the last bar was the best. He had a nice structure and a better flow.

spook your verse was beaten by ack on every aspect.

your punches were not hard hitting and ya verse had fillers in it.
You should try and elevate on your structure and punches and try to fit some wordplay in.

No hate.

Ack rtf in my EC battle (honestly) or this vote will be DQ'ed!!

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Voted For: BIG Spook

i drop lines on AckRite like its money
im so sick my game even got me his honey
2...wack, self-glorifying and weak.
my lines are so fresh it aint even funny
why did you accept this battle you must be a dummy
2...are you kidding me, this aint pre-school.
this verse go past ya like a Marshall Faulk juke
come on~ this rap is posted by ya boy BIG Spook
2...again weak, the 2nd line is really kinda pointless.
I dont know why ya call yourself AckRite
all those wins were won against a pussy~is that right?
3...better but not a punch, cuz you finished by asking him if it is right.
im all up in ya grill and im just a lil kid(14yrs old)
i saw some verses on ebay you might wanna bid
2...ebay lines are played, and you made it weak.
i aint even tryin to win this battle cuz i know im da best
so imma give you my verse and let you finish da rest
3...wack, wack, wack!!!

OVERALL: 14/60


Damn Spook Is Lame....Known For Lettin Dudes Run A Train
He Stalks Me, Opposite Of Alicia Keys...He Knows My Name!
5...ok, not really feelin this punch.
Mad? Get Glad...Spook Gets Pleasure From Readin Jet Mags
You'll Get Jabbed...Wit MARY KATES...Lyke The Olsen Fam!
6...better, worded nice and a good concept and wordplay.
Fictional Rhymes...Gave Dis Barbie Time 2 Make-Up A Verse
Cant Rap Offline...Drank A 'Potion'...Now You Tryin To 'Curse'!
5...kinda weak, magic lines are getting played to.
I Cash In Loot...While This Bastard BLOWS Into Male 'Flutes'
Bullied In Jr. High...So He Killed His Ghost 2 Become Spook!
7...dope!!! nice play on his name like that.
Fuckin Herbivore..Lines MEAT, Urs Got Ate...Mines Cannibal
Shoulda Let Ya Bitch Write Ya Shit...
......I 4got She 'Below Habitat' Lyke 'Self-Conscious Animals'!
6...decent wordplay, although the wording of this closer cud be better.

OVERALL: 29/60


not the best i've seen from ackrite

but at least he has punches....

and if i need to explain further as to why he wins then RV really is getting gay.......

V/ - AckRite

RTF!!! on tha dizzee rascal battle......links in my sig


Vote switched

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LMAO!!!! MY BAD!!!!

i'll pm strobe to switch the vote......sorry bout that!!!!

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Oh Shit Solo.......LMAO.........I Thought You Seriously Gave it 2 Spook

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Voted For: AckRite

lol i dont even need to give an explanation wit this to me ackrite is a clear winner in this battle... outclassed him in ever aspect of battling... punches personals flow structure wordplay...

ackrite...

you started iff weak but you got better as it went along fam... you did what u needed to in order to win this good job trhats all im gonna say on this 1 fam..
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big spook..

you need to elevate wit your punches man... flow is ok structure is real bad u need to up your game man read other peoples battles and find a style you'll get better wit time time fret man..

v/ ackrite for having a better verse for punches and enjoyment.. pz

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