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01-31-05, 06:28 PM
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Pair-A-Dyce ft Chamillionaire- Ya Girlfriend
IP: 1964 2957
This will prolly be one of my last tracks I post on message boards, but I still will update soundclick. I need to work more on my demo. But yea I mixed an old hook Chamillionaire did with the beat and layed 16 on it, jus done, holla
http://www.soundclick.com/util/Stre...ID=2048157&q=lo http://www.soundclick.com/util/Stre...ID=2048157&q=hi Visit soundclick for download, leave messages, whatever. I left feed on Mic Mastaz and Hip Hop |
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01-31-05, 06:52 PM
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<<-Carpe Noctum->>
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IP: 0825 899A
wow, this is dope,you did great, nice delivery,flow and style, love the beat, was really feelin this track, dope job..stay up.1
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01-31-05, 06:53 PM
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Light Weight
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IP: 286C B22D
chamillionaire=tha truth
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me vs. L~S...i think he cheated tho so check wut i posted b4 u read tha posts... StAcKiN Gs 'n LiGhTiN dat pUrPlE  open mic |
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02-01-05, 10:53 PM
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IP: 1964 2957
boom...........
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02-03-05, 10:56 PM
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IP: 1964 2957
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02-03-05, 11:57 PM
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Better than you..
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IP: 01C3 560C
this was alright...i didnt really like the chorus and the part in the intro after he spits the chorus where he is repeating something that sounds like, bo bo bobobobo. i hated that shit. other then this it was alright. lyrics could have been better. kinda reminds me of chingy. im not hating tho dont get me wrong its just im looking for somethign different. to me this track was generic. i dunno. be mroe original with your ideas. peace
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02-04-05, 11:49 AM
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ONLY GOD CAN JUDGE ME
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IP: E89B 00E7
feelin this joint highly impressed actually...dayum you even got the people at my house askin who it is on the track...good shit mayne...
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02-04-05, 05:02 PM
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No Relation To Tina
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IP: EB8D 9EAC
yea i didnt like the chorus that much either.....its aright though......beat is nice.......you have a good flow.......you have a pretty good voice.....lyrics are ok.....could have been better in my opinion............use more multis...i think it would make you that much better.....thats all i can think of right now
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02-04-05, 10:15 PM
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IP: E1EE 8560
i wasnt really feelin the track just din move me at all, cant say anything really about it, maybe its the hook..... just got kinda tired...... try tokeepthe listeners attention a lil more next time, work on the rhyme scheme or something, not sure what to suggest
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