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09-04-04, 01:43 AM
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New to RB
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Trying To Elevate
IP: 0ABC 464B
I'm surrounded by evil....they wanna enter my soul//
I love to spit that antifreeze....and leave em out in the cold// Ready to bleach the whole scene....and make my message "stain-free"// And laugh at my foes....cuz those hos are mangy// I rest heads under hedges// Mainly cuz they tried to shine....I pushed them over the ledges// And hip hop is my fetish....I don't regret it// All-comers get peeled like heads of lettuce// E-Town...ain't no one realer// Tombstones sayin',"Damn, he shouldn't have messed with that killa!!"// Niggaz think they hard....cuz drugs they dealin'// I'm a hurt they feelins'// Spittin' silver in hearts like blood villians// I'm straight chillin'....just without the chronic// I make whole scenes ugly....like projectile vomit// I'm like a moshpit....currupt and destructive// Niggaz is silly and soft....like muffins and Mupphets// Trying to elevate. |
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09-04-04, 01:55 AM
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...The Truth...
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IP: 28AD 5545
yo, i may be new to dis site but not to rap and dat was pretty good, so keep elevatin, u on yo way dog
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09-04-04, 02:02 AM
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New to RB
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IP: 28AD 5545
I appreciate that responds, man. I'm just trying to get back into mid-season shape.
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09-04-04, 03:34 AM
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Light Weight
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IP: 3240 794D
yo hommie i think your already back,,you just have to believe it now,,,,because i do,
7-10,,nice drop
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My level of battle is your problem. Not minds. So dont toss me till to you tried me. This is my ring. You cant box me. I'll drop rocky. I've climbed the mountain's Making all contenders obsolete. All you bitches is running like water fountain knocking me!! Defeat list Young Beezy out come:5-o Lost Battles:none out come none 
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09-04-04, 03:37 AM
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New to RB
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IP: 28AD 5545
Thanks, ya'll...that's mad motivation for ya boi.
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09-04-04, 03:49 AM
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Flyweight
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IP: 3240 794D
thats my nigga sultan...
big up to my boi..fa sho... we gettin' out of the hood...bling nigga bling |
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09-04-04, 08:23 PM
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New to RB
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IP: 6804 D41F
Looks like yo elevatin fosho. I rated it like in a battle cuz I gotta lot a time on my hands and I turned out.. 40/50... So B-. Pretty sick punchlines in there. Keep at it... Wishen I had the skills, time and patience ta elevate.
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 0-0 (Current Battle Pending) x.See It.x District of Authoriy G-Quad Fam Fab 4 Eastside and the Fab 4 Jrz |
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09-04-04, 08:53 PM
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Light Weight
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IP: FD9D 8A8F
sultan you should noit feel happy for what these homos said because they are all wack, but that was great piece,perfect example at using the stucture tha multies and the internals in your verses
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my merked list Guaranteed Young gunn |
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09-06-04, 12:38 AM
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Blow Me
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IP: 7D7A FF3D
yeah not a bad drop at all just keep workin hard...
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My Lines Are ILL yo |
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09-07-04, 09:11 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: CD98 49E3
sux ya mum.................
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