ewww singing is bad. dat was a mistake fam, singing aint something u can half ass
Beat is hot of course JEZZY
1st verse im not feeln, no presence, lyrics wack, FLow and deluvery need major work
up the volume and quality.
yo for real the singing needs to be done by someone who could sing. no hate
2nd verse better flow, lyrics nothing special at all. work on delivery, presnce and breath control.
overall 3/10 beat is hot

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