jea jea
called robbn and thieving
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/20grand.htm


order
20 grand - 1st and 3rd and chorus
Debit aka D-Banks- 2nd

holla wif feed...

LINKS:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=186209
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=186038

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

Nice Title, Robbing and Thieving, (i have yet to leave feedback on ASAP altho i'm pissed i been lookin for that beat like forever and a day).. lol

*listening now*

"woooo ohhh wooo ohhh ohhh ohh"
nice beat, gsuz twunny where the fuck you get these beats lol.. anyways, 1st verse pretty decent.. You already know the name! BRUDDDDDDAA! "clean ya spot up like detergent.. lol" "airing out ya block like a respiratory system, cursing at the cops for tryna put us in the system" "gingerbread man we never fall a victim of the fox" lol haaa.. i like your emotion on this shit, you know you doin good, twunny.. your confidence in this song proves it. nice stuff fa real, stay up kid.

chorus= hotness... this should be a featured track off the chorus alone.

verse 2- the origamy line was hot.. and no you didn't mention no Bernstein bears.. lol Debit soundin like Banks as usual you came more off as laid back but i like your lyrics. "bitch you hood hop more than J Qwon" lol @ the CRASH BANDICOOT LINE *dies* ha that was clever mos def.

verse 3- 20 Grand:
"sonic boom just dustin the clouds..", "pockets more greener than forrests..."
just as good as your first verse, hot shit str8 up..

Like i said already, this should be a featured track, this was sum hot shit str8 up.. i like the fact you switched your style up a lil' twunny, you took your metaphors to another level, and refrained from using "like" so much and your delivery is fuckin ill, i can tell you tryna improve and that's what's needed on this site, keep elevating you gonna be hitting the top soon enuff... as well as Debit i like your comparisons lol @ the Bernstein Bears line that had me crackin up, i'm downloadin this.. i'm lettin the Wild Wunz here this shit.. this hot.

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jea this like my newer shit...

and the line was "greener than photosynethesis.. lol

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

oh it sounded like forrest sumthin to me.. lol................ well good job, nice shit str8 up..

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RTF... new 20 n debit aight, u seem to be the couple

hmm, hot beat n e one can spit flame to this, lets see if you are beter than jus "anybody" tho, the flow is nyce on this for real.20 some of the bes shit i heard from u yet. u say airin out the block on alot of tracks, the chorus is kinda hard to understand, u gotta pay close attention. the oh oh oh is like sumthin off a nelly song or sumthin. debit up now. generic style. lyrics basic... not bad, i mean honestly its bedda than 50 percent of the peeps on here. but u aint too original. chorus agin, its aight. 20 acutaly came wit emotion on dis one, thats one thing i usualy comment on. smokin a half ounce while loadin tha pound. original. finaly i can say i heard uspit a punch i never heard n e one else say n e thing like. i know im hard on my feedback most of the time but ill say that 20 came nyce on dis. wow, the shit jus cut out tho at the end. prob gionna b on ya mix tape rite 20? if u keep comin original like this shit i mite dl one of ur tracks. keep em comin.

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best Audio Head May- the Omen*

OMEN ON MYSPACE

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jea this is on my mixtape...
good shit lol

those other tracks i posted like a coupel days ago are samples.. not nessecarly gonna be completed.

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

nice drop fam second guy kinda sounded like i unno i didnt really like his flow sounded
like he had marbles in his grill he had a dope verse though overall dope drop homie

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It's Murdah now, not murder.

how do u know what marbles in yo mouf sound like?
lol

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

hey casper do u want me to "ghost write" for u...OHH WORDPLAY...lmao...don't get "ghosted" by 20 grand nigga...lol...upppin for more feed

nice track, do i hear it in the club nearby?

na, thats fat joe...lol but nice track only thing is up ya vocab the both of ya
and that would make yall iller...........word

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O Know, He's Back!

i dont understand why u would get mad at a person for trying to give you feedback. i mean, he's bein honest, if you could grasp the concept of constructive critizism you could take what he's tellin you and use it to your advantage. y u say what 20 will do to him? you cant man up f'yaself? dunno jus frusterates me when people dont understand that they're gettin what they're askin for, FEED!

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best Audio Head May- the Omen*

OMEN ON MYSPACE

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thanks for the feed everybody...lol...uppin for more feedback bitches

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i was on aim all day...lol...where were u and why do u want me to get on aim...lol...uppin for more feedback