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10-12-04, 06:19 PM
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IP: 7C6F 690C
well nice feed back... and there is a chance of me gettin gunned down...
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10-12-04, 06:27 PM
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In ya area.
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IP: 7A3E F05A
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So those are my thoughts. I got a piece from a while back that might help you out with how to do this properly. Although, it's kinda more of a story than an actual love song, but it might help - http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139258 It's been dead for quite some time, so I'm not saying you should drop feedback, but if you feel a need to revive it, go right ahead. Peace. P.S - Do I think it'll win her heart? I'll holla after you've made changes, if you decide to do so...
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10-12-04, 06:30 PM
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IP: 7C6F 690C
yeah well i'll check ur story or song...lol... and remember thats part one... theres gonna be a part two...
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10-12-04, 09:32 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
3/10 needs so much work...
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10-12-04, 09:48 PM
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IP: 2F28 A819
uhm yeah uppin...
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10-13-04, 06:39 PM
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IP: 4632 68AA
uppin... plz leave feedback and vote...
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10-13-04, 11:30 PM
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Puttin MD On The Map
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IP: 408D D2A2
aight this was tight.....but on the real you coulda done a lil better and left out the thing bout craig and some other stuff but i liked it keep it up i was feelin it tho
nice G$peed..aka ruff tuff thug lol
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10-14-04, 12:34 AM
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Light Weight
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IP: 6A1B 8FA6
...dont save her she dont wanna b saved dont save her she dont wanna b saved...
..haha get that song by three 6
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10-14-04, 04:40 PM
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IP: DB8D 5EE9
what the hell you talkin bout...
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10-14-04, 07:30 PM
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IP: DB8D 5EE9
pretty sure it will cuz i can tell alot of work was put inta it.
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10-14-04, 07:45 PM
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IP: 6A1B 8FA6
lol its a song
three 6 mafia - dont save her
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10-14-04, 08:17 PM
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IP: DB8D 5EE9
he didnt bite shit.
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10-18-04, 12:28 AM
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IP: 6A1B 8FA6
wtf???? manneeeee i dident say he bit anything damn im jus sayin he needs to quit tryina save that girl mane jus listian to the damn song
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10-18-04, 12:44 AM
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
best thing youve ever dropped.
flow was actually pretty good, lyrical content needed a little work but what i have learned from this type of venture is that rap usually wont work unless youre just ill as fuck. aka, dont try it. but you are definatly getting better kid. pz.
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10-18-04, 08:28 PM
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...Money Is Everything...
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IP: DB8D 5EE9
hey how come no one view this and leave feed back. socrates lets have a battle. i jus wanna see how it is to battle proz. alright lets go.
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