http://www.myspace.com/dakidex

One of my latest tracks, Still tryna elevate so I'm lookin for some helpfull adivce. Dl* the track off my page if you feelin it tho. And get at me if you're down to collab. Peace Easy !!

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Nice sample in the beat. Ight, drum pattern drops in. Really Feeling the beat. Just waitin for you to come in........

Ight, you come in. First off, turn your vocals up, i could barely hear you at the beginning. You intro to your voice was on point, but the verse itself seemed to be stressed instead of released freely. For example, there were times where you didnt finish the last word at the end of the bar because you was taking a breath for the next one. THats a big NO NO, cause it fucks with your flow, and throws the listener off if they are concentrating on what your saying. You might want to consider taking out some words so you can achieve this. Overall decent track, wish it was longer so i could get a better feel of your style. But dont just cut the song off like that at the end, lol.

7.5/10

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beat sounds pretty decent

vocals need a touch better mixing...sound far away...and a little muffled

other than that...ur flow is str8 and proper


lyrics sounds personal

Hook is appropriate...


Pretty good drop man


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yeah my nig this sample is hot b..

this beat is pretty much crack sumin juelz wud spit on or camron..ya diggg..

waitin' for u to come in...

yeah flow is nice got that kanye delivery going...quality real bad..but that ain't yo fault..i like ya lyrics nice multi use..."u can rule the world like a nas track" nice..i like this song only if it was profesionally produced.......

shit's pretty hot..but shuda been more than a verse ya dig

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...597#post3116597

rtf please holla

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listening

the beat is pretty cool...


and o yeah the sample fits in gd...u shud have just stuffed in some dubs!


quality shud be upped a lil..cos ur elivery wasnt so so great to be honest wichya!


well as for ur flow u were pretty ok...but the emotion was a step back


ok this was short but nice tho!...keep 'em coming!

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alright I'm feelin this beat, got that reminsce vibe to it. Your quality needs work but it's ok for now. Your flow is smooth, keepin it sooth too. Lyrics are pretty good, lyrics; nothin wrong with them. You talkin real on this one, I like that. The lil hook already added is pretty ill. but what else to say it's a short track. do somin longer next time.

word rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...487#post3118487

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The beats ill

Ok you come in, should mos def up your vocals I cant hear that great.. What I can hear is cool, lol just realized you had an accent. damn.. flow sounded good.
This ladys loud ass singing is kind of annoying but its a cool hook..

Its only one verse? damn I was waiting on the second one

Up your quality and I think it could be tight

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