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Old 07-23-05, 01:12 PM   #16
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werd.... he's dope




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Old 07-23-05, 01:30 PM   #17
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Originally Posted by hotshh!
i"m ready when u are.........

drop 1st......i'll follow you

Kept urgin' me to drop my verse, you prolly pre-write bro
'Cuz the only heavywait you had was in the lobby before lypo
But in your sig, that belt must reflect upon your rhymes
You're on the grind...only beatin' people in a league with 2 lines
Your use to 9? Practice, your fragile structure is gettin' broke
'Cuz you were the perfect match...'till I used you to light my smokes
This hype's a joke, like funny crackheads, why's hatred ya game?
Really you ain't shit, that's not even a play off ya name
I'll stay off the lame, lines...it's not that I'm used to war
But every wack concept I thought was one that you've used before
Hot's just mad I left TE, what's really damagin' this chump
Is right after I left, his crew voted me for battle of this month
And I've been comin' wack lately, but there's something I wanna pop in
His skill's real hot...but we already knew every label would drop him
Haha, your verses suck, they depress me, I guess you write how you feel
And had a shadow of doubt...until d/r's followed right on your heels

There...thanks for letting me drop late, and g'luck hot.
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Old 07-23-05, 02:03 PM   #18
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dope battle right here..........

both came with nice punches all the way through...........

overall i think that 9th had the better verse cuz his punches were more laid back as always and just hit hot all over................some of hot's punches i think to me seemed a little forced like too much effort was put into trying to make them real hard hitting and in the long run it made them less hard hitting............no hate to either one cuz both of you cud take this battle but i got more enjoyment from reading 9th's verse this time so i give him the win................

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Old 07-23-05, 02:15 PM   #19
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Old 07-23-05, 04:31 PM   #20
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IN DIS MATCH I GOT NO GUEST APPEARANCE TO TAKE ME HIGHER BUT
ILL BURN DIS M**FUCKER DOWN WONT BE NO NEED FOR MC FIRETRUCK
WAITED TIL I DROPPED MY VERSE SO YOU CAN TWEEK YA LYRICS
SO ILL GHOST YOU SO FAST YOU'LL BE ABLE TO SPEAK TO SPIRITS
DA ONLY REASON YOU A VET IS CAUSE PEOPLE LIKE ME "HURT CATS"
U COULDNT "COME FRESH" WIT PEPPERMINT STRIPS AND CERTPACKS

vs

Kept urgin' me to drop my verse, you prolly pre-write bro
'Cuz the only heavywait you had was in the lobby before lypo
Your use to 9? Practice, your fragile structure is gettin' broke
'Cuz you were the perfect match...'till I used you to light my smokes


hotshh! made some bad moves here, like the first three bars n the ending
closer was cool tho, good verse overall

9th degree came wit some punches i wasnt feelin, likethe 2nd bar 4th bar n evry thing after that...the bars that followed were really simple n u couldve closed WAY better...
good flow tho


vote hotshh! for punchs n consistency...
v/ hotshh!
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Old 07-23-05, 07:49 PM   #21
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nothing

vs.

But in your sig, that belt must reflect upon your rhymes
You're on the grind...only beatin' people in a league with 2 lines
Your use to 9? Practice, your fragile structure is gettin' broke
'Cuz you were the perfect match...'till I used you to light my smokes

v/ 9th degree
 
Old 07-23-05, 10:28 PM   #22
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fuck you mean nothing?
you couldnt beat me on ya best day
but keep humping on niggas legs, Rider.
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Old 07-24-05, 02:46 PM   #23
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haha....../..................
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Old 07-24-05, 04:26 PM   #24
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******my bad its in caps i click and pasted it

ROUND TWO

FOOL YOU DIG? IM CUTTING BACK CAUSE THE ARTILLERY'S TOO BIG
INSTEAD I'LL GRAB A ROCK AND JUST STONE YOU LIKE YOUR NEW SIG
-Nice Personal and a punch here..

I'LL LEAVE THIS KID SHAGGED........ CAUSE THIS LIL SAMBOS A BIG FAG
SAY HE'S ILL, BUT NO ONE BELIEVE IN HIS DEPTH (DEATH) LIKE ZIG ZAG
-Ahhhh Good Punch.

HE'S NOT A COMPLETE FAKE, SOME OF HIS VERSE'S A FRACTION HARD
BUT 9TH DEGREE'S BOUT AS REAL AS THE MOVES ON HIS ACTION CARD
-Liking the personal w/ Punch

YOU'RE LIKE A MUTE RECORDING ARTIST... YOU'RE A 'STRANGER TO CD'
CUZ NO ONES THROWN BIONIC ELBOWS SINCE POWER RANGERS ON TV
-Ha Good Punch

IN DIS MATCH I GOT NO GUEST APPEARANCE TO TAKE ME HIGHER BUT
ILL BURN DIS M**FUCKER DOWN WONT BE NO NEED FOR MC FIRETRUCK
-Ok personal and a punch


***NAH HOTSHH F*CK THAT, DONT TAKE NO CHANCES...FINISH HIM***

HOE YOU LIKE THE BLIND IN CASINOES......... YOU SEE-NO CASH
..................COVERS HIS FACE IN HIS PICS SO HIS PC DONT CRASH
-Good Pesonal and a punch

WAITED TIL I DROPPED MY VERSE SO YOU CAN TWEEK YA LYRICS
SO ILL GHOST YOU SO FAST YOU'LL BE ABLE TO SPEAK TO SPIRITS
-Nice wordplay.

DA ONLY REASON YOU A VET IS CAUSE PEOPLE LIKE ME "HURT CATS"
U COULDNT "COME FRESH" WIT PEPPERMINT STRIPS AND CERTPACKS
-Meh Explain dont get that

THATS WHY YOUR ASS STAY WACK LIKE THEM CATS IS RECRUITING
CAUSE IT AINT HARD TO "SEE 9 D'S" LIKE BARELY PASSING STUDENTS
-Ok Punch

U'LL PROLLY WIN DROPPIN DIRT BUT NO MATTER WAT DA SCORE SAYS
IM FLIPPING SO MUCH SHIT ON 9TH HE'LL GROW GRASS FROM HIS FOREHEAD
-Ok closer

Overall- nice verse Hotshh had some good punches w/ some personal. Liking your wordplay the 2nd part of the verse Kinda fall, but it was good ok punches nice personals. Keep Dropping

Kept urgin' me to drop my verse, you prolly pre-write bro
'Cuz the only heavywait you had was in the lobby before lypo
-Ok Punch

But in your sig, that belt must reflect upon your rhymes
You're on the grind...only beatin' people in a league with 2 lines
-Ok Punch, Liking the personal

Your use to 9? Practice, your fragile structure is gettin' broke
'Cuz you were the perfect match...'till I used you to light my smokes
-Ha Good wordplay, good punch

This hype's a joke, like funny crackheads, why's hatred ya game?
Really you ain't shit, that's not even a play off ya name
-Good Personal and a punch

I'll stay off the lame, lines...it's not that I'm used to war
But every wack concept I thought was one that you've used before
-Meh Ok punch weak but not strong

Hot's just mad I left TE, what's really damagin' this chump
Is right after I left, his crew voted me for battle of this month
-Ok punch and a personal

And I've been comin' wack lately, but there's something I wanna pop in
His skill's real hot...but we already knew every label would drop him
-Ok Punch still weak though

Haha, your verses suck, they depress me, I guess you write how you feel
And had a shadow of doubt...until d/r's followed right on your heels
-Lol Nice closer

Overall 9th that was a good verse, had some personals but the punches were weak in my opinion, I see you was trying to flip the personal into punches but uh it was still weak, some punchs I found good. Wordplays was good. Keep Dropping.

Conclusion- Alright I'mma have to vote for Hotshh, because I felt his punches were more harder. 9th nice verse but in my opinion I felt you came weak, If you added more wordplays into them PunchLines you would've gotten my vote, but they were weak, but still a good verse.
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Old 07-24-05, 07:58 PM   #25
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4-2 counting lady and troop

unless soul makes them re vote, theirs count cuz THEy were on time
 
Old 07-25-05, 02:02 PM   #26
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hmmmmmmmmm is it a tie??? wat happens in Title fight ties?? LOL
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Old 07-25-05, 02:29 PM   #27
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Tie.
-CLOSED-
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