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Old 01-01-06, 09:53 AM   #1
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Daubs vs ~stylez~

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Battle Rules:

10-20Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No bullshit

min check and drop

do not decline

Minimum posts to vote: 500

Check in by: 01-01-06 at 10:23 AM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.
 
Old 01-01-06, 09:56 AM   #2
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~stylez~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-01-06 09:56 AM.
 
Old 01-01-06, 10:05 AM   #3
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how many lines you wanna go......................?
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Old 01-01-06, 10:07 AM   #4
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So let me just attack this dude and snatch his jewels then whack this hersey./
His raps bad like they wack and blurry....
....but ill leave you more blak-and-blue then a Magics Jersey/
Im Game and u be remindin me of Yayo, im jus new and u still be gettin KO'd/
dont say no, stay low, u forced mo den how many 50 cents go into payphones/
im wordin Acid- and FLames, im attackin wit pain, mai lines wud fracture ya brain, /
People claim u game, u Stealin da G and A, but still aint half of muh GAME/
yo rhymes petty, you aint ready, your rhymes decrease while mines augment,/
u lyin, cuz the only time you got a nine in your pants is when you got penis enlargment/
I destroy any nemesis masculine or-femenine-fags,/
I sever them... your a detriment you sucked off eleven men.. including my ass/
rhis guy below-me..named daubs. experenced-an-orgy/
did the train, and thas how they came up.....
.....with the theme for rice-a-roni/
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Old 01-01-06, 10:12 AM   #5
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Daubs has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-01-06 10:12 AM.
 
Old 01-01-06, 10:17 AM   #6
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Showdown aka ~stylez~ ...LOL

he got locked up..he's stuck, fuck thinkin he's bad
how can we freestylez...when even his prewrittens are wack
I let you in LL, it caused a bang like an explosion
fam saw wackness in you
but I only let you in when id decided to CLOSE them
i can imagine your house in LA..i know where you live sty
and your house isnt fat and pink, but its still pig,sty
he comes with played shit like, "im sicker than infections"
so when he tryed out for 3 CREWS..
..he suffered TRIPLE rejection
il showdown how to rap n' make him think his stylez not wack
then pin him to the floor......and win with atack
that^ lacked flow creativity and personals,i got the curse
but shit, that ONE punch describes your WHOLE verse
ima use a keystlye to win, its all that i need
but if you keystylez...then my victorys guaranteed

Fuckin halfass keystyle, all thats needed for this faggot, FUCK YOU
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Old 01-01-06, 10:21 AM   #7
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nice prewritten no personals verse.

I win

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Old 01-01-06, 10:47 AM   #8
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Voted For: Daubs

Felt pretty one sided to me. Daubs had better punches, even though he keyed it... it still flowed better in my opinion.

he got locked up..he's stuck, fuck thinkin he's bad
how can we freestylez...when even his prewrittens are wack
^meh..
I let you in LL, it caused a bang like an explosion
fam saw wackness in you
but I only let you in when id decided to CLOSE them
^so so.
i can imagine your house in LA..i know where you live sty
and your house isnt fat and pink, but its still pig,sty
^ UK Humor?
he comes with played shit like, "im sicker than infections"
so when he tryed out for 3 CREWS..
..he suffered TRIPLE rejection
^Had me laughin'.
il showdown how to rap n' make him think his stylez not wack
then pin him to the floor......and win with atack
^...don't throw your arm out...
that^ lacked flow creativity and personals,i got the curse
but shit, that ONE punch describes your WHOLE verse
^decent
ima use a keystlye to win, its all that i need
but if you keystylez...then my victorys guaranteed
^meh..

Sho, you verse didnt seem like it had any type of direction or flow in my eyes.

So let me just attack this dude and snatch his jewels then whack this hersey./
His raps bad like they wack and blurry....
....but ill leave you more blak-and-blue then a Magics Jersey/
^Pretty good, but I don't do text so mebe thats a played punch.
Im Game and u be remindin me of Yayo, im jus new and u still be gettin KO'd/
dont say no, stay low, u forced mo den how many 50 cents go into payphones/
^meh...
im wordin Acid- and FLames, im attackin wit pain, mai lines wud fracture ya brain, /
People claim u game, u Stealin da G and A, but still aint half of muh GAME/
^wack
yo rhymes petty, you aint ready, your rhymes decrease while mines augment,/
u lyin, cuz the only time you got a nine in your pants is when you got penis enlargment/
^so so
I destroy any nemesis masculine or-femenine-fags,/
I sever them... your a detriment you sucked off eleven men.. including my ass/
^played idea
rhis guy below-me..named daubs. experenced-an-orgy/
did the train, and thas how they came up.....
.....with the theme for rice-a-roni/
^W.T.F.?
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Old 01-01-06, 10:48 AM   #9
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This was feedback posted for ~stylez~

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uppin......................................and uh..??? yea uppin
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Old 01-01-06, 10:50 AM   #10
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.............thanks mentalz........................................... ....
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Old 01-01-06, 11:25 PM   #11
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Voted For: Daubs

v/daubs

for punches, 'n shit, good ones, yeup, no argument
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Old 01-11-06, 05:40 PM   #12
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This was feedback posted for ~stylez~

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pollllllllllllllllllllllllssssssssssssssssssssssss s
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Old 01-26-06, 06:28 PM   #13
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Old 01-27-06, 10:59 AM   #14
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So let me just attack this dude and snatch his jewels then whack this hersey./
His raps bad like they wack and blurry....
....but ill leave you more blak-and-blue then a Magics Jersey/
^No.Played as fuck.....

Im Game and u be remindin me of Yayo, im jus new and u still be gettin KO'd/
dont say no, stay low, u forced mo den how many 50 cents go into payphones/
???...that was aiight.but Not effective at all.

im wordin Acid- and FLames, im attackin wit pain, mai lines wud fracture ya brain, /
People claim u game, u Stealin da G and A, but still aint half of muh GAME/
No.

yo rhymes petty, you aint ready, your rhymes decrease while mines augment,/
u lyin, cuz the only time you got a nine in your pants is when you got penis enlargment/
^WTF!!!...Dont Ever Do That..Sounds Gay...Plus what kinda punch is this?


I destroy any nemesis masculine or-femenine-fags,/
I sever them... your a detriment you sucked off eleven men.. including my ass/
^No.


rhis guy below-me..named daubs. experenced-an-orgy/
did the train, and thas how they came up.....
.....with the theme for rice-a-roni/
Wack!

Overall/=really alot of played lines...none connect'd..an u had a few really strange lines...No hate,But Be more witty'er fah realz.


versus

he got locked up..he's stuck, fuck thinkin he's bad
how can we freestylez...when even his prewrittens are wack
^Aiight,But not Really Hard Hittin.

I let you in LL, it caused a bang like an explosion
fam saw wackness in you
but I only let you in when id decided to CLOSE them
^Hah.

i can imagine your house in LA..i know where you live sty
and your house isnt fat and pink, but its still pig,sty
^Lol..Nice concept,but a lil simple.

he comes with played shit like, "im sicker than infections"
so when he tryed out for 3 CREWS..
..he suffered TRIPLE rejection
^Okay,Aiight Personal.

il showdown how to rap n' make him think his stylez not wack
then pin him to the floor......and win with atack
^No.

that^ lacked flow creativity and personals,i got the curse
but shit, that ONE punch describes your WHOLE verse
^Ha,That Fucked me up...Nice spin on that other line.

ima use a keystlye to win, its all that i need
but if you keystylez...then my victorys guaranteed
^Meh...Bad Closer.

Overall/=Enough 2 win...Decent Drop...But Good enough,Ive seen better from you..So I know You Took it ez on him..

V/=Daubs.
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Old 01-28-06, 04:17 PM   #15
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Voted For: Daubs

Aii

Punchez- Daubs
His Punchez were clearly the overlord in this battle nuttin in specific and nuttin very fascinating just basically overtoping his oppenent

that^ lacked flow creativity and personals,i got the curse
but shit, that ONE punch describes your WHOLE verse


^ Best Bar

Personals - Daubs

There was no strong personal stuff in this battle You both couldve done better in this area in my opinion but then again alot of people lack in this area so Meh...

Meta'z- Daubs

You Both Had no real meta'z But atleast he attempted in this are which mad him take this category with the least of troubles

vocab- Stylez
Well Stylez actually uses to many words which throws the flow off of his verse so thats what really messed him up I think he focusus to much on wordplay and not enough on direct punchez on his opponent

Flow- Tie

You both had a quite trwon off flow i really couldnt put one over the other you both need to work on wording your verses correctly

Originality- Daubs
His punchez werent as played and used as the ones in techz verse so thats a strong point of his drop which any voter could see so thats why he gets this area

Overall- Daubs

For dropping way more original and way more control and orginazation tnan tech so thats why he gets my vote in this battle nuttin personal just voting around to get some credits
YOU BOTH REALLY HALF ASSED THIS BATTLE

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