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Atticus | 0 | 0% | |
Shadows edge | 5 | 100.00% | |
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04-09-04, 02:03 AM | #1 | |
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shadow vs atticus
IP: 75F5 BDD1
ok, i just keystyled this shit.. i'ma post it now cuz you asked to battle, 10 lines cuz im tired and want to go to bed.. no d/r, hate votes etc.
good luck man
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04-09-04, 02:07 AM | #2 | |
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IP: 75F5 BDD1
Gun with full chamber, n you playing Russian roulette
You challenged me to a battle, shit’s what you get With this one verse, I forever change your life biography With this one punch, I rearrange your face geography facing me in a battle is worse than lucifer’s torture spit hotter than hellfire, call me the scalp scorcher least now your hairless nut sack match your top call me when you finally get a ball to drop atticus step to the stage and sadly get booed badly i locked his ass in the basement, changed his name to boo radley
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04-09-04, 02:08 AM | #3 | |
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IP: 75F5 BDD1
yo shit there supposed to be an emtpy line between "drop" and "atticus" but whatever, y'all get the point
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04-09-04, 02:14 AM | #4 |
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IP: CE79 7DB8
i knew u'd follow up
the hoods answer to gettin the 'burbs-clean'/ was 2 get rid edge this 'herb' by any neccessary means/ When U overcome my 'angel dust' U gain 'wings'/ check you if you 'flinch' fuck you/ att won't 'swing' at you/ he only 'kills-kings'/ Don't sing in your title matches/ you bring out the bitch in yaself/ cap you if I lose steal your belt/ and toss your 'strip of crap' on my shelf nigga/ w/e
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04-09-04, 02:29 AM | #5 |
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IP: CE79 7DB8
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04-09-04, 02:57 PM | #6 | |
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IP: 75F5 BDD1
upping for votes... but i dont really care about this battle, vote on my other ones damnit ^
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04-09-04, 05:19 PM | #7 | |
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IP: 75F5 BDD1
uppin again... be cool if i could at least get one vote ^
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04-09-04, 05:24 PM | #8 | |
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IP: 4C8F 0F5D
Lol I Guess I Shall Return The Favor' ..
Shadows edge Got This Shit Though.. "Weak Battle" Because There Were Very Few Lines But He Took It... In Most Every Category... Punches: Shadows - Check It With this one verse, I forever change your life biography With this one punch, I rearrange your face geography facing me in a battle is worse than lucifer’s torture Flow: Shadows Had The Better Flow Stucture: About The Same - But I Liked Shadows Structure A Bit Better Multies: Shadows -- Checkity Check atticus step to the stage and sadly get booed badly i locked his ass in the basement, changed his name to boo radley Not Bad For A Closer Vote: Shadows edge
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04-09-04, 08:29 PM | #9 | |
Flyweight
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IP: C5D3 56FC
Aiight this was one helluva battle I'm talkin like pseudo-epic (not really but w/e)
::::THA BREAKDOWN::::: Punches- Shadow had some fire fire punches and Atticus's didn't seem to hit hard at all Flow-Atticus had good lines with the exception of one (was 2 get rid edge this 'herb' by any neccessary means) that threw off his whole verse but overall i liked the structure Multis- Shadow had the only multis in this one. personals- ummmm didn't see any hehe Opener- Atticus was better by definition but it had that one hideous line in it but hey Shadow's opener wasn't that bad either Closer- Shadow Definately Shadow....that Boo Radley shit was awesome!!! VOTE-SHADOW
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step up and get merked cuz i take care of bidness/ A killa without witness from the start to the finish/ you're fallin off like you came down with tha sickness/ cuz when you step to tha Phreak I'm gonna leave you dickless HASTA LAVISTA MUTHAFUCKA!!! A-1 Lyricists |
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04-09-04, 08:54 PM | #10 | |
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IP: B18A 27B8
shadow just owned u atticus, at least you made a feeble attemt to rhyme this time, shadow, nice punches and ur closer alone owned atticus, i hate that fucking book though.
v/shadow hit this up http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118632 |
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04-10-04, 07:55 AM | #11 |
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IP: FAEF 230F
ok u both came hard n the punches were direct but i was feelin shadows flow like the others said my vote gots 2 go 2 shadow he jus wanted it more!!1
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05-04-04, 08:13 PM | #12 | |
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IP: 75F5 BDD1
wow.. old battle not closed... uppin because i feel like it...
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05-04-04, 09:12 PM | #13 | |
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IP: 75F5 BDD1
again.....
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05-06-04, 02:35 AM | #14 |
Flyweight
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IP: 75F5 BDD1
Yourockit!Yourockit!
crotchrocket!Yourockit! crotchrocket!Yourockit! crotchrocket! crotchrocket!
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05-06-04, 02:40 AM | #15 | |
I'm So Punny
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IP: 95FF 1D86
that boo radley shits been done...and done...and done again
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