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Old 06-18-03, 09:19 PM   #1
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i dont care if u peep or not....im just so happy!

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"DreAMs Do Come True"

i never really thought of falling now,
i never really expected this
Talking you for the first time
already made my heart beat

So from then on, you were a dream
i thought i could never reach
i thought you were just mere reflections,
of what's buried in my heart so deep
i was surprised!

you too had fallen for a girl,
a girl who had been dreaming
of you all along
my heart was filled with joy
i realized my dreams were coming true!
what's best about everything
is when you finally said
"I LOVE YOU!"
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Old 06-18-03, 09:24 PM   #2
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is there a link between this and the whole ------KaPOnE roCKS mY BoDy lIke SluGs fRoM a 12 Gay-GE ShoTTy------- looooool

this was nice i like short sentenced poems...makes it easier to take in...like a willy IM GUESSING.....(just ingore that) anyway i liked this alot but u cud have made it more length but it seems nice...has this actually happened and thats why ur so happy...nice stuff agen
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Old 06-18-03, 09:24 PM   #3
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awww babey i felt that shyt....is it a true story - by the way it was writen i could tell that it was

happy for you too!!!

keep da peace ya heard . .. . fashow

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Old 06-18-03, 09:59 PM   #4
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Heh, nice work nitty...

...and nice to know youse happy..(gawd damn, knew i should've made my move sooner..gah!..)..

..but yeah, seriously. Nicely put onto paper. Was what it was. And couldn't have been with a nicer guy than Kapone (i mean nice in an obscure, sewer searching, rat eating way...!...and i don't mean that in the way you might think...more in the creative way...oh frig it, i'm only kidding..i'll leave it at that...though Kapone might understand...)..

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Old 06-18-03, 10:07 PM   #5
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*applause*
good ish...
i liked the true life aspect...
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Old 06-18-03, 10:10 PM   #6
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is there a link between this and the whole ------KaPOnE roCKS mY BoDy lIke SluGs fRoM a 12 Gay-GE ShoTTy------- looooool



not really...i put that on my sig cuz he beat me on yahoo fighter and i lose 10 times or more that was just the consequence if i lose LOL...kap was really good ..*shrugs* oh well i aint even good in the real rock, paper, scissor shit anyways...hahaha im a loser!


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Originally posted by varentao..but yeah, seriously. Nicely put onto paper. Was what it was. And couldn't have been with a nicer guy than Kapone (i mean nice in an obscure, sewer searching, rat eating way...!...and i don't mean that in the way you might think...more in the creative way...oh frig it, i'm only kidding..i'll leave it at that...though Kapone might understand...)..



hmmm...kap is really nice , he's like the second coolest on my hidden list under my bed trapped in some yellowish stuff with a jello and cherry on top LOL (thats how hidden it is)...

lets just say that this one is for someone special that made me soo damn happy like whoa , like whoa , ya know like whoa and more ....like wh....ahhhh yeah kno what i mean....its just like that!



thanks for the replies y'all....i aint really writing for the sake of writing but cuz of the fact that i want this happiness to be shared.....ahhhhhhhh happiness paranoia! (hmmm...nice words for my next poem...hahaha WATCH OUT! )
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Old 06-18-03, 11:04 PM   #7
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Damn Shiz............Last nite when i talked to ya u wus tellin me that you Loved ME......and Now This.....damn....lol

Nice poem nice drop felt the contend

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Old 06-19-03, 05:23 PM   #8
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I'm glad you love me and all, shiznit, but I can't say I love you. We're just moving way to fast in our relationship.

Um... for realz though... thats a nice poem to read. For no other reason perhaps then it's just plain upbeat.

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Old 06-19-03, 07:57 PM   #9
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hmm....not you necro...actually the one behind you who is waering a white t-shirt...

but thanks...its simple but it came straight from the heart
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Old 06-19-03, 09:07 PM   #10
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lets just say that this one is for someone special that made me soo damn happy like whoa , like whoa , ya know like whoa and more ....like wh....ahhhh yeah kno what i mean....its just like that!


I usually only read threads in here and not post.. but think I will make an exception. I am really happy to see you like this. That guy is very lucky to have someone like you love him. About the poem, like all of your writing, I liked that as well. Keep up the good work.
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Old 06-20-03, 11:04 AM   #11
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*drives into thread in 3 whellin caddy and opens fire with a 12 gauge*
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Old 06-20-03, 06:20 PM   #12
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*joins Kapone with an uzi*

damn Kapz bustin caps, how incredably ironic


good poem shiznit...


do you look as good as your avatar?
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Old 06-20-03, 09:11 PM   #13
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do you look as good as your avatar?



errr....better ..LOL


thanks for droppin by anyways....glad u liked it
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Old 06-20-03, 09:23 PM   #14
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omg, does this means what i think it means? lol

btw, nice poem lol
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Old 06-20-03, 09:33 PM   #15
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omg, does this means what i think it means? lol

btw, nice poem lol



i dont know what ur thinking tory....hit me up on aim...LOL...


but im thinking i know but im just pretending not to....thanks !
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