ok i got my 3rd verse. want me to spit it?

ok well anyways... here it is:





ok heres an orientation
god made me with lots of concentration
he needed help creating a master
so he started a congregation with lots of admiration
my nickname from zues was "the application"
he never made a mistake so aberrations were a loss
hip and hop was my favored combination from the boss
after 18 years of preperation and being patient
this is my year of musical and educational graduation
ima go on physical hibernation and melodious vacation
this game is givin me a harmonic invitation to the lyrical federation
and im gonna make it beautiful like a ultraviolet illumination
destroy all the new artists and send them in therapeutic rehabilitation
it'll be considered "the character assassination"
ima rise to the top and be a symbolic representation
to the next generations and be their motivation
when i die i hope to be a revelation cuz of my obligation to this organization
this type of hip and hop articulation is wat makes up my heart
it'll never fall apart untill i pass way and break apart
so if this is where i start then im gonna start to work up
untill i have every artists in my hands and once i reach my destination
of being number 1 on top of this thing called the billboard charts.




good? i think its pretty good

did u go on www.rhymezone.com lol

cuz u used a lot of ion's lol

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yeah i always go there. i love that site

you like it?? i like it a lot

its not a good thing.

i mean like..u shouldnt jsut take words from there and think its dope cuz they are big...ill show u this weekend or somethin

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dude i looked up the definions b4 i used them sso it actually makes sense. and i learn more vocab from goin there cuz i learn the definition. ya kno?

ur school sure does bring up some dumb mother fuckers.. lol....and arent u suppoed to be in class?

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im in shop. we have no work to do so ive been on here all day. well ive done all my work so i just decided to come on here. y rnt u in any classes? and yd u skip class earlier lol

HEY DOES ANYONE LIKE MY VERSE?? besides ricky

true...

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laxdnota is a fucking dumbass

everyone said basically everything so thats all ima say

lol just keep workin at it.. youll get it down eventually

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u dont have ur mind in the right place..... that is all

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...The real Renegade before Hova...