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Old 12-24-03, 12:51 PM   #1
t-west
thatkidwest.com
 
Posts: 542
From: Toronto, ON
I just cant win on dis site....Why???

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What did I do wrong in this battle vs. token

My verse
Another wannabe exec., didnt I just merk one of ya,
"Sphered" his ass, now another faggot to get rid of
knock ya over, only"croak", ur "toad" ass can't get up,
ur "agency" is "overrated", go perfect wit "guerillaz"
first 3 letters in ur name r fukked up n gay, aint "TOK",
it's like foreman to Joe, deliverin ya a big, nice, "TKO"
In ur ata picture, the first letters are a "T" and an "O",
steal my towns initals bitch, wish u were from Toronto
but ur not, couldnt spit "high" shit even if you "toked",
just a big joke, givin more "hits" than an "Evolve" post
Now I can boast, I beat U, go tell the rest of the execs
and heres a lil penny for ur verse bitch...keep the rest


His Verse
Toke will fuck up your style... And leave your bars laid
Only way your punch will leave me red Is kind made by kool-aid
With wit that slow.. Even your nose comes out in last
Your punches are weak. .
. .I stepped out on a limb and put your wrist in a cast
I'ma daze you and I'll Have you poppin those pills
Bring new meaning to pump up the volume. .
. .Said you wanted to hang so I gave you the chills
You drove to this battle.. Just to get some acceleration
When the mods saw you were battling. . they noted special occasion
Token will ignite your rec... Just to give you rec-ignition
You just keep ending back to the start.. like subtracting addition



Like what did I do wrong here, I think I really diss him with the insane amount of personals in the verse, I dun see whats wrong with mine, like...I dun get it...can sumbody help me out plz
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