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Old 09-01-04, 07:29 PM   #1
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Influenced by 1 of my previous battle drops, Peep Dis!!!

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I be havin bad dreams, about doin bad things
No money, my momma is gone, its a sad scene
And the devil's laughin, if there was such a thing
You couldn't weigh my problems out, with a human triple beam
I'm all fucked up, you might find me in the dumptruck
With Gin in my cup,...151 I mix em' up
I'm a tough act to follow, leave your chest hollw
See it ain't that tough, heat that ass up with the "Rollow"
Then hit the rode, explode on niggaz with open debtaz
I talk a lot of shit so my click pack Berettas, ta rip back ya leather
The world is cold, you could find me off that bottle at bout 12 years old
I was tired of all the arguing, fussin, & fighting
10 years later I'm ballin, adjustin the mic'n
Tryin to make it through these hard times tellin my problems, But Who Cares?
Everybody I know got em'... I'm upstairs
Stairin out the window drinkin Olde E.
I know this bottle really love me
I Love You too, you be helpin me through my problems, killin my fears
And you understand when I breakdown, you bring out the tears
And you give me the heart...but I just can't take it
Shits hells fucked up, bad luck...just can't shake it
Half wat to the grave, half way from birth
Startin to wonder what my life is worth
I THINK I'M CURSED!!!!!!
(chorus)x2
I put the gun to my head, tried to shoot
Think I'm better off dead, where's my kids
Make sure they ain't around, tell em' I Love em'
Tell em' ben down on the ground, plug ya ears
What ya hear ain't nothin but a cartoon
A bad dream, ya daddy he comin back soon
In another form, reborn, with some great expectations, I'ma miss you too
believe it

Got dealt some bad punches, but I'ma roll with it
Got served some bad lunches, so now I go get it
Got love when I don't want it, who's teachin me hate
Got hate when I don't need it, I believe in my fate
Diagnosed "Manic Depressive", only learned one lesson
And thats "Fuck it, Forget it, and Let it die like the rest of em"
Battled with the best of em', they can't touch me
Then channeled out the rest of em', you can't fuck me
Might as well gohead and let me murder myself
Niggaz got hate for me anyway, take it as health
And if I see you at the funeral I'ma reach out for you
That one up in the corner, give his ass to the coroner
He just another foreiner, all in my mix
Don't have the slightest idea how I'm feelin bout shit
Cause I maintain my composure, never tellin my plan
My brain stained with doshja, I'm tellin you man
(chorus)x1
I put the gun to my head , tried to shoot
Think I'm better off dead, wheres my kids
Make sure they ain't around, tell em' I love em'
Tell em' bend down on the ground, plug ya ears
What ya hear ain't nothin but a cartoon
A bad dream, ya daddy he comin back soon
In another form, reborn with some great expectations I'ma miss you too
believe it (my son in the backround)="Dad.........................Dad......what are you doin in there?.......How come you're not talkin to me?"x4 faded out

Some more shit I wrote in Febuary when I was on some ill shit... -1-
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Old 09-01-04, 07:30 PM   #2
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nice...
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Old 09-01-04, 11:32 PM   #3
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a yo Infallible that was real nice man good song u writin some real shit right there
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Old 09-07-04, 06:52 PM   #4
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man..............can I get some more feedback on this shit? only 2 drops wtf is that shit??????????????????
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Old 09-08-04, 05:42 PM   #5
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hmmmmmmmmm nice mayne nice keep at it u elevation nice mayne nice
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Very fucking Nice man, deep shyt, Ima nominate ya for Best poet.

Uppin this for drastic....10/10.....NICE SHYT MAN keep it up.


SEE THAT EMPIRE WERD~!

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Old 09-08-04, 05:46 PM   #6
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Undabah1 [2:44 PM]: u always post some tiny lil bullshit post
FlAvA HaZe PiMp [2:44 PM]: lol
Undabah1 [2:44 PM]: like...
Undabah1 [2:44 PM]: thats good keep it up
FlAvA HaZe PiMp [2:44 PM]: ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok jeeze
Undabah1 [2:44 PM]: aight then
Undabah1 [2:44 PM]: lol
FlAvA HaZe PiMp [2:44 PM]: i'll post some big den damn it



ha ha ha ok dis an goooooooooooooooooooooood fuckin script right here// u elevated i have to admit// ur good whoooooo yay go nigga keep doing yo thang lol
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Very fucking Nice man, deep shyt, Ima nominate ya for Best poet.

Uppin this for drastic....10/10.....NICE SHYT MAN keep it up.


SEE THAT EMPIRE WERD~!

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OUT NOW-THE SLEEP & THE DREAM
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Old 09-08-04, 06:04 PM   #7
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bitch ass nigga wtf kinda post is that an IM session?
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Old 09-08-04, 06:06 PM   #8
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yo son dats sum good shit u shud put it on audio make a song from it. Peace
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Old 09-08-04, 11:51 PM   #9
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word up thanks cuz still uppin fo some mo feedback so yall niggaz drop some aight -1-
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Old 09-09-04, 12:05 AM   #10
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wow, nice job on this, great flow and content, kind of long tho, but you had a lot to say and it didnt bore me at all, cus it just kept getting better, your a talented writer, keep em comin
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Old 09-14-04, 08:49 PM   #11
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can I get some moe feedback on this shit damn..................
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Old 09-15-04, 01:01 PM   #12
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I feel u, shit anyone who aint considered takin that bullet train before is a flake who aint been thru shit or seen shit in their sheltered ass life. So know that I definitely feel u on this one. For content alone I give it a 10/10.

yo heres sumpthin of mind about the subject, be warned though I wrote it in 6/8 time
so thats why it seems confusing and scrambled up. but if u read it slow I think u might get it. Either way read the words (oh and the first part of the hook was something I borrowed from Jay-Z and expanded on, the part in single quotation) especially the hook. [See I heard of Blues cats sellin their soul to the Devil to get guitar skills. Well I decided to sell mine to God, I thought to myself "Hell if u can get skill like Robert Johnsons from the Devil what could I get from God?". I guess we'll see huh? Anyway 1.


Fuk om stuk in nis world!, why am I here?
Musta been the will of Almighty God, Who put me here
Musta been His Wind catchin my soul, Hand helpin me so
I Could make it thru the Dark-ness, till it was Time
For me to Arise, from the Muck and the Mire, From the Shit and the Mud
Evolution said I was, Weak and neva'd be strong, Wouldnt live to be old
Tortured here in my soul, All the Days of my roam
I looked at life-hated it, Considered Endin it All
My only thought, "What if it was worse where I was goin?"
Use to tell my Mom, "Play uh Song for When I'm Gone
And Spread my ashes gently, On the nearest body of Water"
Cuz Fuk it Death is Upon us, All might as well Jump the
Gun go get it over, Wit-dealin wit Shit!
Since-since I was born, In-here in this World
Fuk Om stuk in nis World!, Round and Round as it twirls
Eminem Said it Well, All Alone No One Else!

chorus:
"But 'May God Prutec my Soul, His Angel walk' wit me
And may His Wind liff me, To where my Foes can't get me
Till He Gives me the Strength-to make War with these
To Fight Ev'ry En'my, And Wipe'em from the Face of Hist'ry
In Return-I'll be His slave, till Death get me
And may He make me His slave, until life leave me
May God prutec my soul, His Angel walk wit me
May God prutec my souuulllll!!!

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