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Old 07-04-05, 09:31 AM   #1
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Premanition vs. The Revelation

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Old 07-04-05, 03:17 PM   #2
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Old 07-04-05, 03:31 PM   #3
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check

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im droppin tonight rev so match me

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Old 07-04-05, 03:46 PM   #4
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And That Was That
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Anger skipped a generation cos ya mums a violent slapper
And ur her next like durex, you just a ‘throwback’ wrapper
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Old 07-05-05, 11:14 PM   #5
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Old 07-06-05, 08:43 AM   #6
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Prem- set up line? lol...i dont get it ''slapper''....the hell is that man?
Second line was straight..........could of been more creative with ya wordplay.

Rev-
Not a strong punch, set up line was good....then the punch was kinda basic...but, you still got this.

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Old 07-06-05, 09:10 AM   #7
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vote revelation better punch hit harder setup was good kinda basic but it wins
 
Old 07-06-05, 09:15 AM   #8
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V./ Prem

Close, ut was feelin the wordplay on prems.

Revs was aigh too.
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Old 07-06-05, 12:01 PM   #9
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pretty good hear.......premanition had a more complex.....one.....for text......revelation would've been dope...but it was just a little soft.......if ya'll were in the streets no one would've said ooooo to either one of these...but since were not...were on thenet......

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Old 07-06-05, 12:10 PM   #10
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wow this sucked

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Old 07-06-05, 12:29 PM   #11
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vote: Prem

both of them could of been a little bit better, Rev sorry man... ya punch was just to basic
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Old 07-06-05, 02:00 PM   #12
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/prem

better concept and better worded punch
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Old 07-06-05, 02:22 PM   #13
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v/ prem
better concept, lil more to it
rev was good but missed by a hair
 
Old 07-06-05, 04:56 PM   #14
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prem decent line i said something like that before i really aint like revs line at all
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