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Old 03-02-09, 07:40 PM   #1
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Week 6: E.C.0-0 .vs MONKEY BARZ 0-0

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Monday Morning: Battles are set up
Wednesday: EC 1 bar
Thursday: MONKEY 2 bars
Friday: EC 1 bar
Sunday: Battles Night Close

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Old 03-04-09, 05:00 PM   #2
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checcckkk, g'luck bro
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Old 03-04-09, 05:02 PM   #3
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monkey see, monkey do, but u can't link up with g's,
coz while im swingin with ma fists, ur jus swingin from the trees,

wot u got?
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Old 03-04-09, 05:36 PM   #4
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see thos toos dat will fire, doggy will get it though cause like a hollywood video I'll leave evos hood n grill wired/

you don't load n pop those my brother theres no weapons on dogs wrist cause he can't render some hotness like his photoshop promo cover/

expos: 2 fast 2 furios has a evo thats wired to shit on it by cops and his rendered pic/his whole photoshop promo cover was just ass cheeks lol
 
Old 03-04-09, 06:28 PM   #5
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i'd say your a bum rapper, man ur slayin those raps,
coz ya lines done make sense/cents like american tramps,
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Old 03-04-09, 06:40 PM   #6
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Wow, Monkey i might have to boot you right now.
You can not be writing your lines like that. Fix your structure
bud. no ones going to understand or want to even read what
you have to say. Shorten ya lines up in ya finish, and lengthen
up your set up. Read into other battles, for examples of what
i'm saying...or look at E.C's bars. See how they are written?


Anyway, EC i liked ya 1st i guess...wasnt feeling the 2nd at all. kind of played.


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Old 03-04-09, 07:08 PM   #7
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dude, both of you guys were garbage

the only decent line was that dude with the Evo, because atleast it was a half decent name play

that 'cents/sents', wow....garbage and played to SHIT like 3-5 years ago. And the monkey thing was whack man. Like that personal didn't connect at all.

vote: Monkey Barz
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Old 03-05-09, 05:09 AM   #8
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upin this......
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Old 03-05-09, 12:09 PM   #9
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Vote - E.C., he had better attempts and at least the nameplay was a bit entertaining. Monkey Bars punches did not seem to connect at all..


Vote - EC
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Old 03-05-09, 05:03 PM   #10
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monkey see, monkey do, but u can't link up with g's,
coz while im swingin with ma fists, ur jus swingin from the trees,
meh it was ok but not hard


see thos toos dat will fire,
doggy will get it though cause like a hollywood video I'll leave evos hood n grill wired/
yea your structure is awful your punch is stretched as fuck and your set up is 6 words that don't make sence, punch was lame too
you don't load n pop those my brother
theres no weapons on dogs wrist cause he can't render some hotness like his photoshop promo cover/
again your set up is a few words and your punch is a line and a half......and again weak

switch your style next week

i'd say your a bum rapper, man ur slayin those raps,
coz ya lines done make sense/cents like american tramps,
you don't have to put cents and sence in there we can figure it out it killed youy line and you could have thought of a lot better things to compare it to then a american tramp......after all its generic as fuck and been done so many times



weak battle

vote ec for atleast haveing structure
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Old 03-05-09, 10:42 PM   #11
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monkey see, monkey do, but u can't link up with g's,
coz while im swingin with ma fists, ur jus swingin from the trees,
^^pretty simple^^
i'd say your a bum rapper, man ur slayin those raps,
coz ya lines done make sense/cents like american tramps,
^^pl-pl-played^

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see thos toos dat will fire, doggy will get it though cause like a hollywood video I'll leave evos hood n grill wired/
^^lol not bad^^
you don't load n pop those my brother theres no weapons on dogs wrist cause he can't render some hotness like his photoshop promo cover/
^^ehh wasn't feeling^^

pretty weak matchup, i think monkey was too into it hence the expos, and ec just wasn't serious. lol
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Old 03-05-09, 11:14 PM   #12
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Vote ec for better punche cuz the 1st bar was the harder blow here...
But both drop good and bad just ec 1 was harder....
 
Old 03-06-09, 02:31 PM   #13
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iiite thats 4-2 my favour. upppp
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Old 03-07-09, 07:26 PM   #14
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EC wins 1-0

monkey loses 0-1
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