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| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
07-24-05, 07:18 AM
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#7
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this was a relatively short peice so theres not much to comment on..the topic was kinda played but u still made a good poem out of it.....used good vocab and imagery....showed creativity...coulda been a little deeper with the metaphores but besides that i think it was great
8/10 keep droppin *uno |
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