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11-30-05, 03:12 PM | #1 | ||
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Voted For: Mentalz
Overall more complex. Stronger vocab in here, and it flowed generally well, only problem I saw with this is your structure sucked in a few parts. You had good concept development and kept the reader interested most of the time. Props to both of you for a good battle. |
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