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Old 12-03-04, 03:07 AM   #1
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Old 12-03-04, 11:11 AM   #2
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Surreal entities, take over and dominate ma dreams
Im walkin in an abyss, surrounded by strange oddities
Damn yo, it hard 2 figure if dese tings friends or enemies
I shudnt hav smoked dat last J, cos ma mind is meesin wit me
spherical shapes in da sky, damn i must be higher than high
Random imagery flies, incadescent picture swoosh past ma eyes
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Old 12-03-04, 02:15 PM   #3
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I'm feeling you G, i shouldn't have toked that lightest green
Now im horny as fuck, and I swear tha bitch in the corner just winked at me!!..
As I think, I realize I'm walking thru a puzzle, a maze...A Labyrinth!
So many pieces seem to fit... But to my amaze...They were just actin!!..
Why get high?...Why let time just pass you by?...
Most say for the elevated feelin or stress, I say cuz I'm afraid to fly!!..
Its debated, The mind is a dangerous weapon when stimulated...
And it can really throw you off wit all that random shit if wrongfully penetrated!!..
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Old 12-04-04, 05:01 AM   #4
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"systems in a down"

this crazy and confused world of ours lost touch with the galaxy's plans
now universal disorder is in order...controlled by the magic hands of man
we as humanity have become too busy traveling these unraveling paths
with no sense of direction but an ignorant perception for the aftermath
God created us in his own image then gave us free will and spirited souls
we sold those clearance price to control a globe in hopes of infinite gold
all's we got were the woes of those in which we should never of known
every piece of the puzzle has been lost or hidden in the forbidden zones
how did we cross lines deemed impassable and surpass the unimaginable
why did the tangible turn out dismantled and strength become so fragile
when did broad daylight become a designated place to hide our shadows
whats the purpose of illuminating darkness when it finds all the whackos
wheres plan b? or a right way, or the choice that wont fail ever so often
we're too busy tackling issues instead of removing the nails in our coffins
how 'bout this...embrace pain, evade the sane...and frequent our sorrow
the journey will not be made...if there is nothing worth seeking tomorrow


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Old 12-04-04, 11:46 PM   #5
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These grounds I walk upon are fitting pieces in an unkown puzzle..
I call out for help into the blackness, but my voice is muffled..
Throughout this abstract dream, I will hold on and never let go..
I screamed upon eternity...and I'm still waiting to hear an echo..
A deformed man looks to the skies, and see's the puzzled clouds..
In the world of unknown meaning and thoughts, confusion is renowned..
Emotion is lost into the craniums of men, and fiends reliquish hate..
Rewind times as corrupted minds begin to cripple and break..
Poetic flows cannot describe this place in which I hide..
For this abstract place of unknown meanings, It's the portrait of my mind..
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Old 12-05-04, 06:00 AM   #6
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as a man stares at me from far above
i feel god givin me the love
as i walk to god my feet lift off the ground
from here on out i know im no longer bound
as i walk on clouds floatin above just where i stood
i look at god cryin so i know he under stood
as i live my life in heaven ive left all the dark times behind me
so now im in gods hands knowing that im free
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Old 12-05-04, 01:19 PM   #7
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Metallic elephants, metallic planes, a path to take,
Its hard to tell if this is real or if im just half awake,
Is this a fegment of my imagination or somethin else,
Im paraniod and I really need somebodies fuckin help,
Confused... cuz all I see is puzzle peices in the sky,
Oh shit, thats right, I took a few hits of acid didn't i?
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Old 12-05-04, 09:21 PM   #8
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Acidic dreams float by im melodramatic slowness
puzzling immages decend from the heavens above
quickly the vision is clear, metaphorical armagedon
diplomatic scenes of virtue and diplomacy given life
by the god above peering through with a million eyes
burning into our souls, stop the maddness and the hate
planes crashing and people a-flame, he is angry
repent, hail marry full of grace the lord is with me
now is the time for our judgement, we sleep
we dream
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Old 12-05-04, 11:51 PM   #9
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appealing factors of what people's eyes capture, everythings fake, nothings real
notions of emotions being conveyed in my mind see more than i view is surreal
i have screws loose and my behind is rollin.....but i wonder where is my caboose
truth can only be percieved with the bulbs of light that shadow angles being obtuse
my path is puzzled but the pieces fit....floating above are the choices that stick
stick infront of every action so theyr infact inpactin my decisions that flick
envisions that emit other thoughts and consequences for the missions to pick
everything can go either way whether its the man, elephant, light bug, or plane
trains of thought being corrupted by the brain that remains so unstably insane

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Old 12-07-04, 06:50 PM   #10
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Creators Betrayals


Other worlds another dimension, face filled with so much tension...
Unfinished universe, missing peices, God's not putting attention...
This mans lifes in suspension, he's walking away from our earth...
But who is this man, I mean he has been with us since its birth...
Alert, the world's shattering, all of this creation is falling apart...
The atmosphere is fading away, its all rewinding back to the start...
With no heart, this insanity's marking the beggining of the end...
I mean, the universe is so unstable,... not even God can mend...
The sky is bent, darkness went, the Earths falling into an abyss...
Pray one last time, for the blessing to give the Earth one last kiss...
But now real person turning away from us, and this is really odd...
That, the one who created us, and turning away from us... is God...
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Old 12-09-04, 07:15 PM   #11
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Missin puzzle pieces have currupted my direction
Walkin wit out affection has diminished my obsession
PLains, trains, and robots have conquered the planet
Realize the truth, human nature could't handle it
Twilght Zone filled with Rhetorical rhyme schemes
Yellow CAUTION tape's blocked off Historical crime scenes
Extraterrestrials roaming no-mans-land
Hostile environment has put a loaded weapon in our hands
No respect for human nature, No more tears to cry
In the future no one gives a fuck if you DIE


thas a tight picture though for real, i didn't really understand but i tried to make the best of it.
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Old 12-11-04, 12:24 AM   #12
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I think the picture means..


the modernization..of nature..broekn animal acres..
from the king of the jungle..to ranning by mayors..
bee's ran not be heart..but by a mans light bulb..
and wings being replaced..with 2 pairs of light gloves..
its not the wordl..its life and the price of..all for years..
its all proved..with an human image in the wall of cphere..

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Old 12-12-04, 03:53 PM   #13
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Temporally im alone in space pondering about my Life
As im walking it feels like I’m losing breath from a Knife
When I try to reach out to catch a breath I tremble in Fear
As I step near & see aliens witch made me shead a Tear
I’m stop to look up in the sky as of witch there is no Sky
I see a different planet & feels like its falling for me to Lie
It feels like im in such a puzzle my mind twitches to a Beat
Sounds of teachers from school asking me to take my Seat
A ring of fire trying to burn my chest as in this was all a Test
As I walk to where im distend to be I go to sleep in a Nest
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Old 12-13-04, 07:53 PM   #14
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its my first time ta write a rhme for a pic so listin

the clock hit 12 dot dot zero zero //
eyes drifted as my thoughts rose of a rap hero//
what already came to pass is flashin in ny iris's //
and i was effected with necglected thoughts that was like viris's//
an as a white rode appeared in my eyes //
i looked around and sawl that god was showing me my life //
what happen when it happen my future was flashing //
this dream was repeating my hole heart beat from the begging of my presents on the hence world called earth //
god was showing me ever moment in my life all the way from birth//

and thats that it says to me that i fell a sleep and god took my mind throw my beggiing on earth and the pic shows taht my dream just begun cuss it shows animals and that for babys so its the begging for me if you know what im sayin
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Old 12-15-04, 05:20 AM   #15
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kaos dimension

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watch matter materialise
once realised in my eyes
can u visualise, words to the wise
beware these snake guys
trues take my hand
and i'll take you to the promised land
get lost like a grain of sand
in my land, made with due attention
i care too much to mention
digital, meets the physical,
the kaos dimension
peices of my mind
fragmented, like data thats hard to find
will the weed help bind?
or fray,
causing chaos to rule the day?
watch reality dissapear,
what IS your place here with me?
you didnt mention, but i see
the tension of reality, has saw fit to set you free
but before you cease to exist,
exist in peace with me
because order is all good,
but the chaos can set you free
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