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03-02-06, 05:40 PM
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Ya mom massages my nuts
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Yup!!!dat New Heat From Trip!!!!!!!peep!!!!!!!
IP: 3842 F0D2
Yea yea yall..this sum new hype shit I put together, peep it, feel it, vote it hot...holla wit that feed back!
Song Title: Think I Wont!? Completely written an performed by: Triple_N Link to song: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=185998 Links to feed left: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=223194 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=223178 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=223418
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Then wonder why when presenting there's to others...no one looks twice Because at the end of the day, you get what you give So, when you consumed with his...don't get mad when everyone else is Last edited by Triple_N : 03-02-06 at 06:30 PM. |
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03-02-06, 05:45 PM
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IP: 0CA8 E427
listenes again gladly...lol....like i said im feelin the energy when you come in, you come out of no where which is good cos its hype its like there i am str8 in ure face nigguh, lyrics are hot for a club joint...like i was tellin u on aim hook is catchy n bumpin, makes you nod ure head down, and i like how u add a melody to the 2nd verse, with the end of the bars and then you switch ups shit is hot, that stood out with the hook the switch ups because it keeps me interested and with that Oh you oh oh want nigga shit thats a nice touch because thas the shit thats gon get people bumpin in the club really cos shit is hype and has a melody to it and u switch it up again its dpe...and hook is catchy this my 2nd time hearin this and im sayin it haaa...dope ass joint from u dawg..deff summin id see on mtv or BET..1
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03-02-06, 05:56 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: C527 8B3F
YOU WONT!!!!!!!(even come out of the closet) what makes me think youre gonna pull some heat and have the balls to clap it??? anyway... i actually like the track...good effort ...nice delivery not my style .... but who am i to judge right ...this is rap verse is it not... if you are making money in this game ...you wouldnt have time to sit around and start beef in here...so with that keep up the work..its not bad...just get your priorities straight!!!
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03-02-06, 05:57 PM
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The Rulers Back
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IP: CDAA 2D0A
*Listens*
---------- Lol feelin it when you come in strong like that flow is dope mos def feelin tha delivery on this though you comin off confident as hell son chorus catchy as hell this def a i dont wanna say club track but jus suttin hype you can bump on tha way to tha party or suttin feelin it kid stay up....=1= |
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03-02-06, 06:15 PM
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IP: E8B4 945F
thats my shit...
fasho.. straight banger love ya style on this one... comin hard reminds me of some m.o.p shit at the beginin just wild'n lyrics is good but ya flow is the best it makes you whant to keep listening 9/10 rtf fire -1
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03-02-06, 08:43 PM
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The Paragraph President
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IP: 2372 BC06
You make me laugh sometimes triple, not in a bad way but you just have a funny way of sayin shit sometimes. the way you said the hook made me chuckle lol. but thats not a bad thing. well first of all the beat I aint really like, it seems a bit slow but it's not a bother. not one of your greatest tracks but your hook is decent. delivery is very strong on this one, as well as your lyrics. flow is very out going and it kept this shit together, you know. overall I thought this was a song I'd download but it's not the greatest hit from you.
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03-06-06, 09:57 AM
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NO SURRENDER
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IP: AC2A 692A
Beats ok, flows decent on poin, voice is dope...decent lyrics.
I think the hook is ill, dope mixin on it. 2nd verse, flow again is top Sick track, only thing you could change in the future to improve more imo is a more complex rhyme scheme. All on point.
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05-06-06, 04:35 PM
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IP: 5163 532A
Listening...
I like the beat. You come in strong...I like the flow. Lyrics are typical for a banger track. I like the hook too... Nothing much to say man. Hot track, a ncie banger. Of course I'm downloading it haha. Good shit...keep it up. |
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05-07-06, 02:22 AM
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10:23 till i'm 86
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IP: 5C45 839C
hood emotion, soundin like exzibit on some shit.
diggin the chorus like the flow right after the first chorus, real catchy good gritty lyrics, fits beat well. all and all good, the best parts were when u mixed up your flow made it sound catchier and memorable, i woulda liked if u spit faster in some parts. anyway good drop i'd give it a 8/10 get at me with some feedback http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=227829
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