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05-04-05, 08:21 PM
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leave you rest'n pz's
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Complete rv run down, pt 1 & 2.......
IP: 79B1 EDD4
Rv run down…………run, run, run kiddo Part 1 We all know there’s cheaters, leaders, and RV back-seaters With stacks of feeders witch are crap like the wack cheaters, Leaders like the cheaters cuz they stab back at other leaders But feeders stack heaters and stab back at da wack cheaters cheaters clap back caught or wack and beef back the feeders That leaves back-seaters to stack heaters n clap wack cheaters Now attackin cheaters: is feeders, seaters and backed leaders feeders crack to cheaters n that reflects back on backed leaders cheaters are now beef eaters n set tracks to attack back-seaters back-seaters clap back and snap wack cheaters with black reefa backed leaders quick to trap credit like he’s wacked da cheetah now backseaters crack wit facts, seaters’ll turn leaders into bleeders seaters stack attacks at cheaters cuz they lack like their wack leaders …who got wacked neither, I hadta step outside for a breatha Chorus 1……(lights a joint and a smoke n snaps open a beer) Now I may mack on, tap on, or even smack on RV cheerleaders These creatures r worse then, eaters, cheaters, and wack leaders I chat to neither, leaders, feeders or cheaters, just my back seaters But beef eaters map out back-seaters in hope of being backed eaters Part 2……..…..(puts out smoke, crunches can n passes joint) Wow, Now leavers back to attack with cleavers on wack cheaters But teasers act stacked thinking leavers are newb believa’s Now back-seaters pissed at wack cheaters and crap leaders Back seaters n leavers chatter back about wack teasers n cheaters Cuz Feeders feed off other feeders to attack the back-seaters Leaders allow both cheaters n feeders to become wack backed leaders Imma beleiva, lack facts wit attacks then step back as seaters Now readers track the leaders with stacked facts their cheaters N back-seaters chatter back to other back-seaters bout leaders Which leads us back to stacked facts about whacked cheaters I back neither cheater, feeder, or backed leader but slap eaters U Attack achieva’s that lack backing from wacks or backed leaders Why..? cuz eaters, teasers n cheaters try to mack cheerleaders Back-seaters RAP,! and don’t wanna just sit back and pull leavers Cuz if we did, there’d be no room for you either…! . Ask yourself, who are you? wack Leader, back-seater, beef eater, cheerleader, feeder or leaver...
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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05-04-05, 08:37 PM
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New to RV
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IP: 3B8D A3C4
ey yo man dis was aiight it had my ass confused
and stutterin every few seconds....but dats tight... ....8/10....creative....return da fav. on my new verse its called "ill always love you"
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05-04-05, 08:59 PM
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leave you rest'n pz's
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IP: 79B1 EDD4
you need to fix your link, i left feed anyways lil j...
ill edit in links soon.
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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05-04-05, 09:05 PM
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E-Style, Bitch.
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IP: 6EAC C462
daaaaaamn!
if you read that shit fast, its crazy as hell!!!...it fucks with ya mind, but on the real it was multi madness an i love the way u used the concept of the peice in every line an made it all peice together an fit into a verse, that shit is dope as hell good structure, top notch flow as always, multies were off they chain, an the concept of the peice kinda sums up RV an the mentality of some on the site, really really feelin it, man. u dropped another one of those, fuck-a-nigga-up-cause-i-dont-give-a-fuck-o.m'z  didnt u leave the council???? come join my fam,
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05-04-05, 09:11 PM
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Skadoosh!
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IP: 91F7 E22B
damn that shit was dope as hell
the fuckin multies was crazy as hell it definitely fucks with ya mind..........i can't say much more than what i put in part 1 for feed cuz the 2nd part is just as dope as the 1st Daz..........dope shit!!! 9.9999999/10 Return the favour Daz on my RV Road Trip OM!!! we get up to sum crazy shit there!!!!
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05-04-05, 10:37 PM
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leave you rest'n pz's
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IP: 79B1 EDD4
links
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=189165 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...455#post2128455 hope this confuzes the fuck outta people but trust me it does make lots of sense...if you got a brain
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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05-04-05, 11:53 PM
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B.I.G.
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IP: 7D8B DD8E
tight nigga!!!! tight shit!!!!!
I love that one.rhymin vocab lol feedback plz!!! http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=189354
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05-05-05, 12:07 AM
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leave you rest'n pz's
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IP: 79B1 EDD4
thats actually what you would call multi's
inners, and assonasance...... ..but you can call it one word ryhmin till you elevate
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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05-05-05, 01:40 AM
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Detrimental Thoughts
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IP: 2E75 EE69
woah.....fuckin multies....i liked it and that sums up RV pretty much....i've been here a year and it wasn't EXACTLY like that before but it changed real quick....everything just crazy.....10/10
keep droppin like this
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05-05-05, 02:25 AM
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leave you rest'n pz's
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IP: 79B1 EDD4
Werd.feedback Will Be Returned D....
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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05-05-05, 12:37 PM
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in your system
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
yeah daz, this is what i like to see...people getting creative, but speaking the truth.
some parts are hard to follow, but if you think, it comes to you.... this and 9th's OM pretty much defines RV, hope you keep up man ...except i dont know which one i would be, lmlo word, keep up yo
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05-05-05, 02:40 PM
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IP: 183F 8D72
nice second part to this, i knew you were gonna ask people who you think they are, like i said under the first open mic you dropped, i think this is creative i told you this before and the second portion is a nice addition to the first part (just as many multis if not more) and you still speaking ya mind, i'm feeling it.. stay up, 1... oh and check out the link in my sig it's a topical battle... been open months.. stay up. 1
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05-05-05, 04:21 PM
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IP: 0AE0 3B1A
Haaha this was sick...
I was really feeling this ,, You had some crazy Multies... Some dope wordplay, nice vocab the concept behind this piece..was good really feelin it , like how you spoke your mind, and didnt care what no one else would say Structure was good , this was another dope peice from you daz , havent seen anything less from you keep it up
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05-05-05, 04:39 PM
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a.k.a prozak
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IP: C8F2 8CC9
ehhhhhhh...wasnt feelin this too much..i dont wanna start nuthin and say u wack but i wasnt feelin this open mic..its like u took a line that u written in a minute and just put in diffrent orders of sayin it...5.5/10..sorry..i'll try ta type better feed next time
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05-05-05, 04:59 PM
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leave you rest'n pz's
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IP: 79B1 EDD4
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YOUR RIGHT IT WAS JUST A CONCEPT FROM 1 LINE,... its to bad that you didnt understand it to its fullest.... i mean technically you are a feeder n a reader....... so i dont expect you to really get the jist behind a complex verse like this 5.5/10 on this open mic is just plain ass funny.... you need to get ya head outta the box and understand this concept, if you dont you will remain the herb you already are no beef, but im speakin real, 99% of rv owns you in battles because they understand the creativity that was behind this verse . im only returnin feed to people that understand this verse... so in otherwords, read it again kiddo............
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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