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Indeph | 4 | 100.00% | |
BWALLakaILLNESS | 0 | 0% | |
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12-09-04, 07:36 PM | #1 | ||||||
CHRYMESINDICATE
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19. Indeph Vs. 46. BWALLakaILLNESS
IP: 8EEC E82E
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Battles open Friday Night At 12:00 AM Eastern Time Check-Ins Due By Sunday At 12:00 AM Eastern Time Verse's Due By Tuesday At 12:00 AM Eastern Time Voting Ends Thursday At 12:00 Am Eastern Time 10 Lines No Biting No Feeding No Recycling The Person With The Most Votes By The Deadline Wins If You Break Any Of These Rules Including The Line Limit You Will Be Eliminated From The Tourney! Good Luck!!
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12-10-04, 05:56 PM | #2 | ||||
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IP: 3240 794D
.....checkin in.....
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12-11-04, 01:06 AM | #3 | ||||
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IP: 3240 794D
.................................................. ...............yo you can never get a 2nd wind..you only re-fall.. you better hope to win for structure..you can B-wall.. you under par like before a T-off..wait for elivation.. you would think with two names..you'd have a reputation.. please don't breed more herbs..doctors kill his baby.. though closest you get to fam..is if you still my avy.. why are you in the King's tourny..you can't be a canditate.. when your best lyrics..looks like when I rap on accident.. called Illness as an alternate name..stil no growth.. I don't know why I even spit..you know he gon know show.. watch I'm right.. .................................................. ............deph
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12-11-04, 08:42 PM | #4 | |||||||
Life is a Constant Battle
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checkin in
IP: B0AC 8D55
yo im checkin in and dropping my verse today kid
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12-11-04, 09:52 PM | #5 | |||||||
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heres my verse
IP: B0AC 8D55
In depth from shot down, where only thing ill is that ill-in-noise...
Hi def Fram i surrond sound, sure any mean kill this kat and boys... worked, red shirt, never gettin startin position..dont talk kid listen... merked, ded dirt,kadaver setin embalmin maskon..cant walk head misson caped, readied, indepth story cover Tom Brockhart, kids ending was at start... maped, studied, couldnt walk in depth if was shark, kids blowing has no dart... killed, cold meth tinkle whiped ass had no poepere, I make Ray right1 say pepsi dilled, told,deaf =crippled fast had biology, darwin take ya out with society Worked gay like Simmons Thunder Thighs, rape such ojsimpson wonderang why Fucked rye, like prizons surrender guys, date butch go cousin pun de tang pie
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12-11-04, 11:01 PM | #6 | ||||||
Bow Chicka Bow Wow
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IP: FEFC E273
its obvious he won.............
indeph better everythin ............., better structre...........better punches... better personals..........he came harder b-wall had some strecthed lines.......punches really wrent connecting....... v/indeph no need to break this down |
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12-13-04, 06:48 PM | #7 | ||||
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: 1F80 0E29
structure tie both were pretty good althoug i prefer indephs a little more
vocab inseph hands down punches indeph he had a good personal bwall jsut cam corny really so vote indeph good job to both though
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12-13-04, 06:53 PM | #8 | |||||
The Epitome Of Greatness
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IP: 3240 794D
indeph :
your verse was good not great... a couple dope punches decent meta's and 1 good personal.. structure was good and it flowed pretty well.... fave bar : please don't breed more herbs..doctors kill his baby.. though closest you get to fam..is if you still my avy.. the rest of your verse was just decent this stood out the most overall : 6.5/10 BWALLakaILLNESS: umm your verse was basically a open mic you never came directly at him... you beat around the bush too muh with your verses and your style is really gay... i could barely follow it... and some of it made no sense at all i got confused with what you were trying to say a couple times fave bar: none overall : 2.5/10 vote: indeph
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12-14-04, 02:17 AM | #9 | |||||||
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odviously
IP: 001B 98F9
call it a free post.....odvioulsy you guys dont get the flow because it was an audio like text thing directed at him like he was beside me to deep for you to understand i guess but thats ok
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12-14-04, 06:52 AM | #10 | ||||
Back In Business
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IP: 9227 0965
ok....
here's the good and bad parts of both verses: indeph you under par like before a T-off..wait for elivation.. you would think with two names..you'd have a reputation.. clearly ya best line.... other rhymes were forced... almost all were pretty simple... no complexity... punches weren't really hitting too hard.... i believe you coulda come a lot better than this bwall only thing ill is that ill-in-noise... nice line here but everything else was all over the place... i barely understood ya verse... punches neer connected... you failed to get at him effectively... you jumbled up all of your ideas and in the end you left me confused... maybe it was too complex for us and there may be some kind of meaning behind ya verse, but without explanations it's real hard to give you props for ya drop v/ goes to indeph... better rhymes (though forced), attempt at punches |
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12-14-04, 02:09 PM | #11 | |||||
The Epitome Of Greatness
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IP: 3240 794D
This Battle Is Closed...Indeph Wins By K.O 4-0
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