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12-09-07, 11:42 AM | #1 | ||
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um okay im a break this down to you in the normal way that i do anyone else...it was totally basic dude. i meen the storyline is played on suicide and all that but the imagery is not as deep as i thought it would be..try writing from a picture to start off your topicals it will help with the reader to vision what your writing even more..but decent work..just need a little improvement and that should do the trick.
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