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05-02-05, 01:35 AM
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Are Be
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Perfection
IP: 2C01 D973
...Representing Degree... Necessity is possesin me as i press to see why you leave Instead of blessin me, God's testin me with absolutely no relief Darkness as my hearts stressed, I'm pressed to progress But this mess is kept, never left, even after I slept On my mind all the time, I climb to levels of hope and despair Am I blind? Missing signs? I'm trying to grow and repair The pen quivers and shivers releasing these bitter thoughts I'd never hit her, accusations as i sit here are truly false Tears race down my face like Nascar, the quick pace is too fast In this state I beg you, pull a Ma$e, and just come back Incoming call's never from you, what did I do to my boo Feeling blue, lets start over new, our hours left are few Sybolically your locked in me, chained and never let go If only that were true, now your sockin me, and sayin no Senses get tense as I'm fenced in court about to be sentenced Your prescence isnt meant too help, not even a sign of pentance Wrecked and sent off behind bars, you said I had an obsession I'm sorry but your beautiful and it just had to be mentioned In a second it'll be ruined but i will never lose my affection Every section in my posession, u were made in perfection
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05-02-05, 01:42 AM
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Are Be
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IP: 2C01 D973
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Last edited by Intrepid : 05-02-05 at 12:06 PM. |
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05-02-05, 01:46 AM
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in your system
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
meh, i think you strained the vocab a little too much, lol, especially when trying to multie it up.....but overall, i think it was a cool piece, had its own uniqueness to it....the start was fire though man, like i said, i think you used too much vocab at the end of it, which kinda took away from your piece.....emotion and shit....but....
Necessity is possesin me as i press to see why you leave Instead of blessin me, God's testin me with absolutely no relief Darkness as my hearts stressed, I'm pressed to progress But this mess is kept, never left, even after I slept On my mind all the time, I climb to levels of hope and despair Am I blind? Missing signs? I'm trying to grow and repair ^ wow, that was f'in hot man, so much emotion/imagery, loving it....definately keep up yo....good drop
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05-02-05, 01:49 AM
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Are Be
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IP: 2C01 D973
Yeah I was keystyling it at the begining and it flowed well. I didnt know where I was goin with this piece the whole time. But I felt I had to lay something down tonight. If you got a link to an OM feel free to drop it. Returning good feedback is always a pleasure.
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05-02-05, 01:54 AM
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in your system
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
well theres one somewhere floating around i posted somewhere....lol.......i'll go up it
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05-02-05, 10:15 AM
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Are Be
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IP: 2C01 D973
Upping, leave a link and I will hit yours up.
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05-02-05, 01:04 PM
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Are Be
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IP: 2C01 D973
Upping .
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05-02-05, 05:12 PM
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Are Be
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IP: 2C01 D973
Upping Again .
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05-02-05, 07:28 PM
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Are Be
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IP: 2C01 D973
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^Upping again god damnit
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05-02-05, 07:31 PM
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Middle Weight
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IP: 00C0 B13D
I think u might have tried a little too hard but shit was fuckin ill. Best shit I seen in a while. Sounded like u really felt it too.
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Open Mics This verse here...... I teach u to flow, Grasshopper What It Is Beyond The Life Wins RoC-a-FeLlA 5-0 ghetto cripple 5-0 NeXion 5-4 RoC-a-FeLlA 5-0 SpokenBluntly 5-1 Losses ghetto cripple 5-0 Da Vinci 5-2 Gambino 5-2 |
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05-02-05, 08:11 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: 47F7 0494
LMFAO... Mad multis in here.
Not a bad drop overall. I think your focus on multis took away from the story a lil bit... But not much. I liked it overall. Good job. Now hit up my OM's. They're dope. |
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05-02-05, 09:57 PM
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Are Be
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IP: 2C01 D973
Word I'll hit it up tommorow. Peace
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05-03-05, 05:43 PM
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Are Be
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IP: 2C01 D973
Upping .
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05-03-05, 09:30 PM
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Are Be
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IP: 2C01 D973
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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05-03-05, 09:39 PM
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leave you rest'n pz's
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IP: 79B1 EDD4
i liked this drop, not cuz of the story but cuz
it flowed well n had pretty consistent vocab and it showed how ya keystyle n thas koo assonasance was good, similar to my madman drop....good stuff, stay up
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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