yo
my words are compound
they hot now
cause i got the know how/
to flow professionally
i got a lot of people testin me/
but ya never gonna strip me of my credibillty
i break words down mentally
i got a sick melody/
and my technuique is flawless
i spit heartless
me and my partners/
in this rap game
well alwasy remain
were impossible to get out like a wine stain
we mantiain/
the champonship
and ya cant handle it/
we can do what ya want to do
u aint even got a name who u/
i can lose all my maturity in a second
and ya can hear me but ya dont get it/
that some one can tear down ya forces
we rollin in pourches
we burin sources/
step aside before i attack
get ready to strike back/
but ya lose ya dignity
ya punches aint even hiten me/
they dont leave a scratch
ill have a body parts detached
front to back/
we dope and ya cant even cope they full of shame
i smash open ya cran-ium/
leave ya brains dangled and mangled
i get labled/
but i aint ever gonna drop the microphone
so just let it all go/

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Clcik Hear To Hear My Music

This was not very good... your structure is hella fucked... up your vocab and shit...

but just keep writin' tho... You'll get better don't worry.

3/10

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uppppppin......

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Clcik Hear To Hear My Music

Make your lines longer but not stretched. Dayum kid. Elevate. You'll get much better.

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Back.....

To bad you dont have any credibility here..

This could have been decent..

With a better structure, more multis, some wordplay, some good punchlines, maybe some imagery and/or emotion, a better flow, a good topic..

Pretty much goes to show that this sucked.