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Old 01-13-05, 10:00 PM   #1
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Topic:evaporated by glory
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Old 01-13-05, 10:24 PM   #2
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checkin in!! give me a HOT topic dawg and goodluck KD
 
Old 01-14-05, 04:59 PM   #3
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Im justa checkin In .....................And good luck to you to mayne

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Old 01-15-05, 10:22 PM   #4
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Evaporated by Glory



My Life is Nothing But a man made story
Because my life is evaporated by Man made glory
My depression Is Depressed because I Am Stressed over Stress
And my Obsession Id Obsessed for the rest which means that I am Next
To be called into the sky like evaporated rain
i wish the hurt would go away like I was evaporating pain
But its all just in my brain as I write this down
you see all the Hury Guilt & shame, Look How thet put me down
Ive been to state to state from city to city
and all I all I seen was Rebates by dates and Blocks to Busy
My fate is To die By Im Destined to Live
I Got a place to die, but i lesson i'll give
dont get caught up by the ways of this world
everyday Death comes to some innocent boy or girl
That why im Here to Induct some Knowledge
And im here to construct this topic into Logic
"For god so Love the world That he gave his only begooten son"
To die on the cross and get Beaten Like a slum
Well he will be back & you would know if you read the story
How The sinner burned in eternal Hell because of his evaporated Glory
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Old 01-16-05, 09:58 PM   #5
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The End


On top of the world, i can see it all from my godly stoop
the world peering up at me through millions of ghostly eyes
I represent all the heros of the world, past and presant
I am fame and glory a new and i am time wasted
people see me and burst out with pride
others look apon me with disgust and spit at my name
everyone who ever had a dream knows me
as a tiresome and lustful foe... people kill for me
people will starve in my name, but yet
no matter the pain and anguish
people will never truly learn. no one will ever know
the secret to true happiness lies beyond me
it lies within your hearts, i am but a charleton, a sham
he who has achived me never really had me
lives lost, familys torn apart limb by stinking limb!
and over what! no one can tell you, no one will
ever realize my pain! i have caused indescribable
agony and yet people come back for more!!!
when will all these people learn,
Fame dies... in the end only a chosen few will
remember your name.... you are only someone to others
if you are someone to yourself...
i am glory, some see me and some dont
for those that do... i am gone in a flash
in a single blink of an eye..... i die
 
Old 01-16-05, 09:59 PM   #6
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.... another non rhyming poem... if u dont understand... dont vote
 
Old 01-17-05, 01:07 AM   #7
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ok pretty close here vocab tied imagery is also tied here creativity is also dope by both which leaves one thing emotion wicked i feel you didnt come as good as king here he had a more heartfelt piece i could feel his words more in his drop so he got my vote.both of you please return honest votes in my battle also.

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