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05-29-05, 10:52 AM
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WhoAreYou?
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Message 2 U Weak Niggaz
IP: A181 D033
Yo I flow deep like bullet heat in yo lungs, Vocab so wide it's like i'm speakin in tongues, When I start shootin verbs i see niggas run, When i take da mic i know you weak niggas done, Yo I see you tryna step hard barin teeth, Oh look my finger slipped, now they layin a wreath, Oh look my finger slipped, now yo ass decease, Oh look da trigger dipped, nigga rest in peace, Yo i be more raw than bloody slab of meat g, Only because certain niggas think they can beat me, Phoney niggas, ain't battled, still talkin nonsense, Only thing weaker than you niggas is my conscience, Yo i ain't even gotta mention a name, they Know exactly who i be talkin bout same way, I ain't seen them battle too tough, but they claim they, Capable of makin a judgement, it's a shame they, Chose to cross a dark minded motherfucker g Takin me for pathetic, ok then we'll see... |
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05-29-05, 08:19 PM
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IP: A181 D033
Yo uppin for feedback people...
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06-01-05, 12:54 PM
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Champion
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IP: EED2 4F8F
dayummmmmmm nigga u hot, frssh 2 def man, tht was good, i like ure style, yo we shud collab pm me and well sort summin out
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06-01-05, 01:12 PM
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NO SURRENDER
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IP: 8F9D 8B56
ok was ok, good vocab used...nice flow throughout, just not feelin the whole thing although it was nice in places.
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06-01-05, 02:53 PM
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IP: A181 D033
thanx.
uppin for more feedback....................... |
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06-01-05, 03:00 PM
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my bad
IP: A181 D033
my bad i didnt know i had to leave a link
heres one: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=193468 |
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