uppin.... im pretty sure the vote count is fucked up.....

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Voted For: Skriptz

You’re getting fooled all around…
…like some1 did a magic-trick
You say your punches are hard…
…but they’re looking like shit
5...not feelin this...too basic!!
Just leave RV…go on…just quit
You wish you had a dope crew…
…once newbs started leaving it
4...nah, this is weak yo!!
Cut your tongue off…
…spitting game is not your fame
Comparing wackness to you…
…there both the same
4...played concept, and basic vocabs still!
Your styles & punches are wack…
…and so are you
& you’re only winning battles against newbs…
…cuz I had voted for you
6...prolly ya best bar!!!

OVERALL: 19/40


half of RV im sure they positively don't give a fuck what we spittin,
cuz half RV likes my shit, the other half knows 'skriptz' is 'prewritten',
0...BOOOO!!! no points for pre-writ lines!!! not from me anyway!!!!
and i know prewritten punches are played, but hey, it makes perfect sense,
but when i 'post up' my verse you'll get 'clowned'like circus tents,
4...ok i give you the 4 for the 2nd line, the 1st line referred to the previous pre-writ bar but this aint a pre-writ bar in general so you get some points!!!
i bet you think battlin me that your the shit, and verses that yours is sick,
and your 'killer' skill is the equavalent to a motha fuckin low budget horror flick,
6...decent meta, nice line!!!
i saw your past battles... wwwweeeeeaaaaakkkkk.... so this has to match,
only time im throwin you out a 'win though' is if theres gonna be shattered glass..*
7...decent closer, gud meta again!!!

OVERALL: 17/40

ok i am honestly shocked.......pre-written shit is soooooo gay and if anyone reads this know that i do not give points for direct pre-writ barz, they are gay!!!! the only reason i give this to skriptz is cuz he didnt drop no pre-writ lines...played concepts are gay but pre-writ shit is sumthin else!!!!

don't do it kiddies!!!!

V/ - Skriptz

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basic ass rhymes dude elevate your vocabulary just consrtuctive critisism no hate

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Voted For: OneStepBeyond

v/ Onestepbeyond

no not cuz of scriptz structure......onestep had a better all around verse.......both were kinda weak.......but it looks like scriptz ain really try hard on purpose.......lacked creativity, no punches, blah personals, wordplay was aight........onestep's wasnt much betta but his lines hit harder than scriptz

OPENER: scriptz
MIDDLE: beyond
CLOSER: scriptz

return da favor......{me vs. tycoon, diman, ovdose, verbal, freestyle-king, etc.} ne one...

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Voted For: OneStepBeyond

You’re getting fooled all around…
…like some1 did a magic-trick
You say your punches are hard…
…but they’re looking like shit
Eh.......unoriginal....
Just leave RV…go on…just quit
You wish you had a dope crew…
…once newbs started leaving it
Eh..........
Cut your tongue off…
…spitting game is not your fame
Comparing wackness to you…
…there both the same
ok..........
Your styles & punches are wack…
…and so are you
& you’re only winning battles against newbs…
…cuz I had voted for you
ok closer.......

half of RV im sure they positively don't give a fuck what we spittin,
cuz half RV likes my shit, the other half knows 'skriptz' is 'prewritten',
ok.........
and i know prewritten punches are played, but hey, it makes perfect sense,
but when i 'post up' my verse you'll get 'clowned'like circus tents,
good.....
i bet you think battlin me that your the shit, and verses that yours is sick,
and your 'killer' skill is the equavalent to a motha fuckin low budget horror flick,
good.....
i saw your past battles... wwwweeeeeaaaaakkkkk.... so this has to match,
only time im throwin you out a 'win though' is if theres gonna be shattered glass..*
nice closer...

OSB had a great closer, more control of his verses, even addressing his played line and turning it into a rejoinder/set-up for the next verse. Better punches on his half.

Skriptz, OK spit, it would take out most herb verses, but against a spit with complexity and decent punches, it really doesn't hold any ground. Not bad, just not enough weight behind the punches, and some were kind of played.

RTF

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Voted For: OneStepBeyond

I think that OneStepBeyond got this battle because i feel that OneStepBeyond came stronger in the following categories...Punches i felt OneStepBeyond got it was effective and was on point Skriptz you should of been a bit more creative on this occasion personals i felt went to OneStepBeyond good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to OneStepBeyond and flow and structure i'll give to OneStepBeyond.

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Voted For: Skriptz

Skriptz.......
You’re getting fooled all around…
…like some1 did a magic-trick
You say your punches are hard…
…but they’re looking like shit
Decent...hit ok...nothin special....4/10

Just leave RV…go on…just quit
You wish you had a dope crew…
…once newbs started leaving it
decent personal here...6/10

Cut your tongue off…
…spitting game is not your fame
Comparing wackness to you…
…there both the same
nice...5/10

Your styles & punches are wack…
…and so are you
& you’re only winning battles against newbs…
…cuz I had voted for you
6/10

overall.......21/40


OSB...........
half of RV im sure they positively don't give a fuck what we spittin,
cuz half RV likes my shit, the other half knows 'skriptz' is 'prewritten',
kinda played on the skriptz thing...3/10

and i know prewritten punches are played, but hey, it makes perfect sense,
but when i 'post up' my verse you'll get 'clowned'like circus tents,
i liked this....6/10

i bet you think battlin me that your the shit, and verses that yours is sick,
and your 'killer' skill is the equavalent to a motha fuckin low budget horror flick,
ok...4/10

i saw your past battles... wwwweeeeeaaaaakkkkk.... so this has to match,
only time im throwin you out a 'win though' is if theres gonna be shattered glass..*
liked it....6/10

overall.....19/40

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Voted For: OneStepBeyond

votin for One

one gets my vote due to harder punches and more creative use of multies

One
ya punches were nice and hard hittin and very creative
ya had a hot flow with a nicely layed out structure
ya wordplay and personals were tight as well
didnt see many multies though try to get them in ur verse man

Skripts
ya punches wernt as strong as they should have been
n your personals well i didnt even see any worth menting
you had a good flow but it was made easy due to ur structure set up
didnt see any multies
u didnt come as hard as u usually do

vote goes to One

better punches, creative wordplay



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