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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
Thorn 5 100.00%
carsonjet 0 0%
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Old 10-25-03, 08:03 PM   #1
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CarsonJet -v- Thorn (experienced votes only)

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LandMark.....60th win possibility.....

10-15 lines max....
You spit first..........
normal voting rules


good luck-and check in....i will also....
 
Old 10-25-03, 08:04 PM   #2
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Yeah This is my Check In Jet

I will spit either tonight or tomorrow, just got back from a Tourni


.........Peace It..........
 
Old 10-25-03, 08:05 PM   #3
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Old 10-25-03, 09:07 PM   #4
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Affraid to Spit Blind, Cuz your bad like Eyes Aimed by Lazers
Im Battling a Fool who's Username sounds like a Company Razor
I'll embarress this Vet like Goofy Parents his Cheeks will Turnin Redish
Shitting Your-self so scared U'll need more Dippers than a R.Kelly Fetish
I'll Drop a Hot Verse, Carson couldnt do the Same If Double Dared
Im A-Head of this Kid, like Un and Circumsized Penis' Compared
U couldnt Spit Dirty As a Public Toilett Seat Stall
Im doubting this Fag Like Unlucky Shook 8-Balls
Carsons Skilled Abilities are Low to the Ground like Early Morning Fog
Your Boring and get Slepped on more Than Human Society Lost Dogs
Winnings an Impossibility kid Like Gambling at Casino's Diceless
Y's Ur Avatar say Master Card when Ya spits and Even Priceless?
C's Worse than Last Place Teams, You couldnt Stun me Usin High Beems
This Battle was a Sceam, Like Jews Awaitin Showers But Breathin Gas Steams
The Only Time U'll get Thumbs Up is co-operatin with Hitch Hikes
If u were a Real Vet and Not wack No1 woulda Dissed Ur Open Mic
(In his sig.......The MOnkey Dream lmao)


Lets go bro
 
Old 10-26-03, 04:17 PM   #5
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simply sick'10 str8 vics 1 loss then another win
musta stopped an taken a break inbetween to whipe ur chin...
Way i flip think i'm equipped wit fins..dis kids a sin..
don't he get the hint?..go back to battlin 0-3's...
that way u can please ya mind wit lyrical ease..
Cus u flow wit more Bark den red wood trees... u fuckin flea..-
Flea the scene...notha pre-teen tryna act mean on R&B..
Face it Thorn...U just a part of me cus i Rose...
couldnt De Feat me if u had 10 times amount of toe's...
Loosen ya corn'rows and start thinkin in a logical sense..
cus from what I read u aint makin any to pay the rent...
I see this as a home to Vent to an extent...
but when Character like u enter..I force wit torque makin u wanna repent
 
Old 10-26-03, 07:28 PM   #6
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Old 10-26-03, 11:05 PM   #7
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Old 10-26-03, 11:23 PM   #8
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Wordplay- Thorn
Punches-Thorn
Multies- Neither
Metas- Thorn
Personals- Thorn
Flow- Carsonjet
Favorite Line- Winnings an impossibility kid like gambling at casinos diceless//Y's Ur avatar say mastercard when ya spits and even priceless

Vote- Thorn. He had better wordplay and harder punches and more personals

hit this up-

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=87936
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Old 10-26-03, 11:39 PM   #9
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gotta go wit thorn....
better puches and better flow
jet came a lil choppy


"Winnings an Impossibility kid Like Gambling at Casino's Diceless"
wha if you playin slots??

A head line was nasty......
 
Old 10-27-03, 03:33 AM   #10
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Flow - Jet... nice rhythm
Punches - Thorn... more of em an well thought out
Personals - Neither... each verse was a bit general
Multis - Neither... it dont matter tho
Meta4s - Multis... that Jew line was sik!
Originality - Both... came fresh
Creativity - Thorn... nice imagery
Wordplay - Thorn... beautiful!
Rhyme scheme - Jet... easy to follow

Vote = Thorn


Crackin battle... fairly close all round... but Thorn had some truely original witty punches... great concepts wit the Jew line an the Mastercard line.


Peep this Thorn (Carson already voted):

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=2



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Old 10-27-03, 04:46 AM   #11
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Thorn - You Didnt Drop Nothing Special...Had Some Nice Punches And Decent Attempt At Wordplay But When I First Read It...I Thought You Were Gonna Get Beat...

...But Thats Not The Case...What Happened Carson??...You Started Off Nicely...The Second Lime Brought A Smile But Then It Went Down Hill...Play Lines..De Feat...Come On...You Know You Can Do Better...You Had Decent Wordplay And Mediocre Punches..

So...With A Better Verse..

Vote - Thorn
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Old 10-27-03, 08:09 AM   #12
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Old 10-27-03, 12:20 PM   #14
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Old 10-27-03, 12:48 PM   #15
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flow=carson
structure=thorn
punches=thorn
creativity=thorn
wordplay=thorn
overall=thorn

thorn took this cuz he just threw mad punches---it was pretty much a merkin shuld name this kid thorn punchgalore and he's creative too--vote=thorn

peep my battle out with skrawni---
 
 


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