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07-18-05, 12:32 AM | #1 | |||||
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"Prison"
IP: 59A2 9AA1
Tears scrollin down my face, not wasting their time nor making haste.
Without care, emotions that I cannot share, Tell me what is next because I can't go on without your breath the rise and upheaval of your chest Trying to take me away, I can't step up Its not my battle to fight I hold my tongue and bite my lip in spite myself. Somebody let it slip--the world your in, trying ways to get you out and tryin to fit me back in. Scream inside because my heart is falling apart. Echoing voices inside my head, reminding me that this has all been said. I can't leave you, not yet, this unforgiving torture that has you wrapped. I cry for you, I pray for you, I get caught up in it because I love you. Things that I cannot control, taking over your mind, body, but not your soul, I see your wanting to fight, but you know you can't because this isn't right. Take it easy, take it slow, the show's almost over then your free to go.
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07-18-05, 12:36 AM | #2 | ||||
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IP: 9F8F 7B28
this is good girl, liked the vocab you used in it, emotion was pretty good, keep it up
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i come from a time when you earned respect, for your rhyme and the way you made words connect, not the money that you made or the girls you sexed, a concept you obviously haven't heard of yet Mars Ill
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