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08-29-06, 12:48 AM
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Under Oath
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~~~~!sinnister Camp!~~~( Unreleased!)
IP: F8C0 2149
My life´s a mess n´ I couldn´t care less I steal your breath and become your death Bonded by blood, a united force Angels of hell, there´s no remorse Big brother´s watching, every night n´ day The shadow riders are here to stay In battle there is no law, or so they say I roll the dice n´break you twice, my way The enemy faceless, still everywhere Your graves nameless, I´ll do my share Disciples unbound where ever u are Knights in armour, prepared for war Hair is blowing in the cold wind Summon the troops, the system can´t win Dressed in uniforms, skulls on their caps They´re on the prowl, now don´t you collapse With the big S at the wheel, they sat on the gas Marching through cities, a massacre mass Trained to torment, they were the champs Working overtime in The Sinnister camps |
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08-29-06, 12:50 AM
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Under Oath
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IP: F8C0 2149
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08-29-06, 01:22 AM
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ROFL @ u niggas since '04
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IP: FC94 E1E4
This is a str8 and dark drop...vocabs always good. I aint one to judge OM coz I dont know much about writing one really but yours is tight. just gotta slow down the turn of events. the way I do that is by trying to give each even atleast an entire bar or 2. still a str8 drop
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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..  
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08-29-06, 03:58 PM
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Whys That?
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IP: 5285 DC82
you need one more link or this will be closed.
-Peace- Last edited by Peace : 08-29-06 at 04:08 PM. |
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08-29-06, 04:00 PM
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Under Oath
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IP: F8C0 2149
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233346
Wtf man i leave so much god dam fucking feedback in this fourm it aint even funny Shut the fuck up and leave your links like you're supposed to. - Self Last edited by Myself : 08-31-06 at 09:46 AM. |
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08-29-06, 04:10 PM
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A Life Of Chryme
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IP: F1CB 652C
This wasnt a bad piece..but i felt like u had a nursery rhyme flow which kinda threw me off...none the less still a decent drop.
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A LIFE OF CHRYME |
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08-29-06, 08:09 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 4688 8E31
good drop man i like it flow preety good an the way i was spitting it out loud man it would def go nice on a beat instead of just a read but i like it it was tuff an good going nice job
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08-29-06, 08:54 PM
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New to RV
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IP: 5479 E0D9
i liked the vocab, i liked the rhymin, i thought it was pretty good
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08-31-06, 10:16 AM
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Under Oath
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IP: F8C0 2149
Close it close it close it close it, PLEASE CLOSE THIS...THANKS!
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