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Old 03-30-05, 08:21 PM   #1
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This is my newest song i've done...i like it.....and 3 peeps think its hot..what do ya'll think...

www.soundclick.com/jayjking its the Problems Song...

I responded to "How I Do It" by Speatsbeats "I Wish I could Die" by Speatsbeats and "Still Coming Back To You" by Devine also the "Dissing Spreee" by Seven and Doom...
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Old 03-30-05, 08:51 PM   #2
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so wheres the diss track? thought it was gonna drop today?
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Old 03-30-05, 08:54 PM   #3
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is that tha link???????????????????????
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Old 03-31-05, 06:19 PM   #4
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yeah thats the link..and i'll drop when i drop...hold ur fuckin horses wicked......
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Old 03-31-05, 08:40 PM   #5
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lol im tired of this beat,the chorus sucks,no hate but true,i dont know why,but i cant like anther version of the eminem song,but meh,nice flow,the songs look like you tryed to hard to sound like eminem,but the lyrics were good,good flow,the verse is not enought long to have another chorus,...no hate ,only an honest feed
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Old 03-31-05, 09:19 PM   #6
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Old 03-31-05, 10:02 PM   #7
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Hmm.... U really shouldn't have used this beat... Lyrics were coo they actually had a meaning 2 'em... yah' mean? Quality is kinda messed up tho... hm... hook is iight... uhhh keep droppin fam
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Old 03-31-05, 10:06 PM   #8
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cool thanks for all the feed..i'll check out ya links....in a min
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Old 04-01-05, 01:07 AM   #9
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anywas BUMP....
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Old 04-01-05, 03:46 AM   #10
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yeh this beat is played as games!!!


the intro is weak/wack.. the voice/emotion u use in this is... fitting (4 the beat)..
1st verse was 'eh.. nothin special.. but better than alot of kats on the net..
@ least u got a flow/scheme down..
U gotta redo that hook man.. that shit is str8 ASS..

3.5 / 10 man.. sorry dawg, I aint think this could even spark a fuckin flame if the beat was laced wif petroleum, but hey, each 2 they own ryte..

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Old 04-01-05, 08:29 AM   #11
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Im sick of everyone rapping to this beat anyways...
Intro was straight.....lyrics cool....flow was goood..emotion was good....

Nice track
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Old 04-01-05, 04:10 PM   #12
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I liked the lyrics beat wusnt the best...

overall nice....could have done a lil betta try to use more sylables.
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Old 04-01-05, 05:46 PM   #13
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I'm not going to kick the dead horse on this one. Wasn't feeling the beat selection or the hook, but you had straight lyrics and a coo flow. Ight? Keep it gully.
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Old 04-02-05, 06:52 PM   #14
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^^^^ lol, but thats exactly wat u did
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Old 04-03-05, 04:10 PM   #15
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uppin 4 feed...
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