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12-02-05, 10:16 PM
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New "Doc" Trin- Fire Man (WIlla Peer Diss)
IP: 9CF2 2208
She thought i wouldnt diss her so i did. Enjoy.
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3162684 Oh i smoked a lot of marajuna and liquor when i recorded this. I also was on crack. Last edited by "Doc" Trin : 12-03-05 at 12:29 AM. |
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12-02-05, 10:27 PM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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IP: 12E7 3621
ur in cs but ur dissing the leader...hmm
aight peepin Production: Of course its nice:9/10 Flow  k...lets hear...your flow is kinda basic not too bad tho:7.5/10Emotion:Ya emotion wasn't that great sounded like u just read it off the paper:6.5/10 Pressense:Man you gotta up it but its aight not too bad.....you dont sound like u mean what u sayin:7/10 Lyrics:Not very good punchlines..wasn't very good....kinda bland:6/10 Overall:this is wasn't a very good diss man u better up ya game or redo it cuz will will kill ya...:6.5/10 keep um coming keep droppin no hate ~1 |
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12-02-05, 10:39 PM
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IP: 9CF2 2208
Its not like a beef diss... because of course i wouldnt diss the leader of my crew... its kind of a inside joke thing.... but if she responds which id like to see.. it be kinda funny, cause i want to see her "kill me" and i dont battle rap... this is only my second time..
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12-02-05, 10:41 PM
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IP: 9CF2 2208
and u gotta remeber its audio... no one does what they do on text on to audio... aduio is always dumbed down... take piggy bank for example... that was a horrible diss... but maybe if 50 cent belonged to this forum and put it in the open mic... it wouldve been a lot better.
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12-02-05, 10:52 PM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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IP: 12E7 3621
yeah true.....i thought u were for real tho
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12-02-05, 11:36 PM
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Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: 8752 F263
hahahahah CUT...
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12-02-05, 11:48 PM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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IP: 12E7 3621
Quote:
LMFAO LMFAO L M F A O OWNED |
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12-02-05, 11:50 PM
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IP: 9CF2 2208
LOL well i guess thats what i get.. lol... i aint no mark though.. i dont back down.. well back to rap battles LOL... peace yalll
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12-03-05, 12:02 AM
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Power Hungry
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IP: E5A2 CE8F
lol, she hoe'd yo dumbass
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12-03-05, 12:07 AM
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IP: 9CF2 2208
Will all passengers proceed off willas penis, thank you.
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12-03-05, 12:15 AM
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Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: 8752 F263
lol i was joking he knows it we were fucking on aim and he said eh would and i was liek yea ok(cause he never drops anything) so im proud that u dropped something lol
beat is dope of course intro idk lol you remind me of a hick when you talk lol i can jsut picture you damn willlyyyyyy go milk the cow lol 1st bar dont breath in so heavy when you start lol no ones really hear of you lol but i have i luv you no personal 2nd bar lol at scurred to get the flow nicer lol at uncle tom meh didnt hit though 3rd bar flow sounds kind of rushed cant hear most of the first line 4th lol at leaving with no tips didnt hit though 5th crack rock played dont know how u got im tom boy lol 6th trailer park no far from it lol played 7th mad played at barbie diary 7th wack no comment probably one of the3 worst 8th lol i do squirt but u ooze lol ok chorus you should have tweeked it a little at least but work on the emotion you lacked the most on that breath control you sound like ur out of breath lol 1stummm no lol another really bad one 2nd flow sounded weird on this line herpes blister wack lol 3rd this was ur best line so far ppl did think i sounded like a little boy on the mic at first till i worked with it and improved it best line in the whole song 4th my names amanda what does that mean lol 5th flow wasnt that good on this line 6th wackest 1st line but the follower was dope 7th no hit 8th flow was kind of off bad closer chorus sound off beat like u pasted it off a little bit? OVERALL I HEARD 2 NICE LINES LOL WEERD EMOTION NEEDS TO BE UPPED SOME PARTS HAD BAD PRONUNCIATIONS BUT MOST WERE GOOD FLOW WAS PRETTY COOL FOR THE MOST PART OFF IN LIEK 4 PLACES EMOTION AND PERSONALS WERE WHERE YOU LACKED PUT A SOCK OVER UR MIC LOL IT WILL HELP ADD DUBS NEXT TIME AND I WOULD HAVE ADDED AN INTRO
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12-03-05, 12:18 AM
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Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: 8752 F263
past tense wheres my bg foooooooooo????
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12-03-05, 12:18 AM
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IP: 9CF2 2208
LOL........... damn its not that bad lol
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12-03-05, 12:25 AM
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Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: 8752 F263
i never siad it was bad lol stop assuming shit..........
well i guess i should respond ill do it tommorow i guess
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12-03-05, 01:22 AM
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FuxJustAWord
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IP: 6369 035F
man i knew i shoulda used this beat like 3 months ago..... back wen people didnt even knew this song existed...... now if i do it, ima look like everyone else
anyways...... u got some pretty good flow, altho nuthin amazin, but u never fall off, but im not feelin sum of these punches, kinda commercial punches...... some of its good lyrical tho, but alil commercial, altho its hard to not make a commercial battle track, lol...... aight quality compared to most people put some emotion in this man..... ur flow and presence is aight, but u needa have some emotion in this..... sounds like ur a couple steps away from whisperin decent track |
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