Rules:

Battles Go Up On Wednesday, Check Ins Are Due Friday Before 11:59 PM EST. Verses Are Due Sunday Before 11:59 PM EST.

12 Lines
No Biting
No Recycling
No Feeding


You May Go 10 Lines If You Would Like But 12 Is The Maximum


Good Luck

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re~verb vs legion (topical)
re~verb vs shard (text)

jus chkin the time b4 i drop

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re~verb vs legion (topical)
re~verb vs shard (text)

fuck it...aint got time..here goes..

you'll fucking no show, and shit thats in the worst case. .
you can't be on fire, when u miss match in the first place
guys got a huge ego, but against re~verb the duckings worse..
far as conduct, you behaving less talent every fucking verse
This guys worse than i thought,Hotshh!, blah, still yet to bust
might be able to convince, but u cant con the rest of us
this man's wrong monthly, you ain't hard..so save it, shit
cuz you play the bitch on RV.. AND in your relationship
watch my metal spray, because your plan's off bluntly
n you'll never coast to the win like living in a landlocked country

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re~verb vs legion (topical)
re~verb vs shard (text)

I never No show to this guys Dismay... so why Delay?
Cuz when the "son" shine thru..... T-storms Die Away
My shit too unique, fuck a name change, kid u a Geek
If u da 'underdog' u getting fucked like a Shitzu in Heat
Look ya Verbs need help, Opposition Proceeds as Planned
Cuz the pic under ya name even proves you "Need a Hand"
Keep dreaming Smartie, forming a crew but ya team is Sorry
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=189095
If u owned the rights to ya name u couldnt be the King of RV
Look, R e-V erbs get ran thru...... like played Hotshh! rhymes
Your name predicted your future...... T-storms will not Shine
About this Tourney, I'm passionate....and you just Acting Bitch
U thought eatn Mac n Cheese on a boat was true Krafts-man-ship

you'll fucking no show, and shit thats in the worst case. .
you can't be on fire, when u miss match in the first place
^^nah, wasnt feeling this at all.........................1/10
guys got a huge ego, but against re~verb the duckings worse..
far as conduct, you behaving less talent every fucking verse
^^nope, weak n really had no basis of a punch..........0/10
This guys worse than i thought,Hotshh!, blah, still yet to bust
might be able to convince, but u cant con the rest of us
^^decent.wordplay was original but punch was blah....4/10
this man's wrong monthly, you ain't hard..so save it, shit
cuz you play the bitch on RV.. AND in your relationship
^^ok,.................5/10
watch my metal spray, because your plan's off bluntly
n you'll never coast to the win like living in a landlocked country
^^nah, perdy weak closer.................3/10
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overall, your verses 1st 2 bars were straight ass...
picked up a lil but nothin overly creative in your drop
exception of the con-vince line, your verse was'nt
what i expected, flow was irratic, struc was ok...........8/50
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I never No show to this guys Dismay... so why Delay?
Cuz when the "son" shine thru..... T-storms Die Away
^^ta storm, some may not get it to flow right, koo...6/10
My shit too unique, fuck a name change, kid u a Geek
If u da 'underdog' u getting fucked like a Shitzu in Heat
^^1st line self glorification was weak hotshh,...but punch was nice....6/10
Look ya Verbs need help, Opposition Proceeds as Planned
Cuz the pic under ya name even proves you "Need a Hand"
^^this was nice..............good play of his shit..........7.5/10
Keep dreaming Smartie, forming a crew but ya team is Sorry
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=189095
If u owned the rights to ya name u couldnt be the King of RV
^^this was koo, link dont really support ya setup from what i read
but punch was definately koo...............................7.5/10
Look, R e-V erbs get ran thru...... like played Hotshh! rhymes
Your name predicted your future...... T-storms will not Shine
^^already hit this punch once, to repetitive................4/10
About this Tourney, I'm passionate....and you just Acting Bitch
U thought eatn Mac n Cheese on a boat was true Krafts-man-ship
^^liked the worplay, good closer, 8.5/10
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overall hot, you brought some nice personal shit,. liked most of your verse..
creativity was top shelf from what ive seen others drop so far....
wasnt to sure if t-storm dropped a no-show verse but it wasnt on the
same level as your verse..........39.5/60<highest yet, good verse

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!

gud drop hotshh..

but daz rofl @ u givin me like 0/10 n 1/10 n shit..
plz try reading it.

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re~verb vs legion (topical)
re~verb vs shard (text)

uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp

re-verb
you'll fucking no show, and shit thats in the worst case. .
you can't be on fire, when u miss match in the first place
not a good start.
guys got a huge ego, but against re~verb the duckings worse..
far as conduct, you behaving less talent every fucking verse
aight, its pickin up.
This guys worse than i thought,Hotshh!, blah, still yet to bust
might be able to convince, but u cant con the rest of us
decently wack.
this man's wrong monthly, you ain't hard..so save it, shit
cuz you play the bitch on RV.. AND in your relationship
haha.
watch my metal spray, because your plan's off bluntly
n you'll never coast to the win like living in a landlocked country
god no.

*verse was half and half, 50%
of your verse was decent. and
50% of your verse was decenly
wack, like ive already said. things
will hopefully pick up for you.

hotshh
I never No show to this guys Dismay... so why Delay?
Cuz when the "son" shine thru..... T-storms Die Away
decent open
My shit too unique, fuck a name change, kid u a Geek
If u da 'underdog' u getting fucked like a Shitzu in Heat
what haha?
Look ya Verbs need help, Opposition Proceeds as Planned
Cuz the pic under ya name even proves you "Need a Hand"
haha.
Keep dreaming Smartie, forming a crew but ya team is Sorry
If u owned the rights to ya name u couldnt be the King of RV
thats my crew, but hey...still a good bar.
Look, R e-V erbs get ran thru...... like played Hotshh! rhymes
Your name predicted your future...... T-storms will not Shine
decent.
About this Tourney, I'm passionate....and you just Acting Bitch
U thought eatn Mac n Cheese on a boat was true Krafts-man-ship
haha, real good finish.

*the verse was hot, punches were
good, fillers were minimul. the flow was
real hot.. overrall, shit was fire.

vote: hotshh!

verses were good, good luck to both.

-eph

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Re~verb bit.......just thought i'd let yall know

how'd he bite?

and i only need 1 more for KO anyway, you'll save me the time

he bit off of a feeble verse on RB

you'll fucking no show, and shit thats in the worst case. .
you can't be on fire, when u miss match in the first place
EHHH...VERY WEAK...2/10
guys got a huge ego, but against re~verb the duckings worse..
far as conduct, you behaving less talent every fucking verse
THERE WAS NO PUNCH....1/10
This guys worse than i thought,Hotshh!, blah, still yet to bust
might be able to convince, but u cant con the rest of us
GET WHAT YOUR TRYNA SAY...BUT THERE WAS STILL NO PUNCH..2/10
this man's wrong monthly, you ain't hard..so save it, shit
cuz you play the bitch on RV.. AND in your relationship
THERE WE GO...5/10
watch my metal spray, because your plan's off bluntly
n you'll never coast to the win like living in a landlocked country
DECENT CLOSER...4/10

OVERALL-13/50(26%)

HOTSHH

I never No show to this guys Dismay... so why Delay?
Cuz when the "son" shine thru..... T-storms Die Away
GOOD......6/10
My shit too unique, fuck a name change, kid u a Geek
If u da 'underdog' u getting fucked like a Shitzu in Heat
OK.....5/10
Look ya Verbs need help, Opposition Proceeds as Planned
Cuz the pic under ya name even proves you "Need a Hand"
LMAO...8/10
Keep dreaming Smartie, forming a crew but ya team is Sorry
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=189095
If u owned the rights to ya name u couldnt be the King of RV
LOL...7/10
Look, R e-V erbs get ran thru...... like played Hotshh! rhymes
Your name predicted your future...... T-storms will not Shine
DECENT...5/10
About this Tourney, I'm passionate....and you just Acting Bitch
U thought eatn Mac n Cheese on a boat was true Krafts-man-ship
OOOOOOOOOOOO SHIT....9/10

OVERALL-40/60(66%)

V/HOTSHH!

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