Yessur on the beat..Hot shit right here.

B. Mag on first verse and hook, Krucial on 2nd verse..


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*listenin* ... i have a song called Comin For Me... so i feel this is a direct diss

dude... sometimes it feels like ur voice blends in with the bass so much that i lose some of ur worse wen i have the bass up loud... hah... u always come with some hardcore (ill kick ur ass lyrics) ... i dont really like ur whole rippin out the heart concept u had goin but u presented well

that hook was pretty decent... especially the second half of it wen u pumped up the emotion....

second verse person is decent... hes got the straight filler-punch filler-punch style... some of them really dont hit for me, but its pretty decent... he sounds alittle too chill for such a stressed hook

wow... the song seemed to be alittle short and ended abruptly, but it fits with the concept... this shit was decent but ive heard better from u.... i think u needa switch up ur concepts alittle more tho... or maybe i just always catch u on the hardcore track, who knows

-One

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...The real Renegade before Hova...

Maybe youre just gay because we still havent collabed, fucking fag

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OH NO, this nigga did not just say

"your bullets like scared quarterbacks, scared to come out the shotgun"

that line alone fuccin killed it. nice tracc here the quality is nice, obviously. Your flow is sicc its right on with the beat, nice shit. Your on that coccy, beat a nigga up tip again, that shit gets repetitive except when i listen to your shit, you alwayz pull of something nice. Good shit. the beat is fire too

2nd nigga is good to. His flow is more smooth and he's more layed bacc on this tracc, so you get One up in that category. the punches are nice aswell. Your voice fits well for this kind of tracc, this was a good verse.

The chorus is good, im feelin this. nice shit

9/10

rtf

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I swear you have the most original lines on this site. One of the nicest punchline cats I heard on here and on the net period. your flow is really laid back on this which I dont think really fits on this. I think how you spit on that track with Ike that was on the RV radio is how you should've came on this. The hook you amp yourself up a lot better and I was feeling that. Second dude had goood lyrics and good flow but his delivery was boring. Overall notta bad track I'd problay need to listen to it a couple of times to start likin' it but keep um comin

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This track is sick..........the punches keep comin.......both MCs came hard as hell.......that quarterback line is ridiculous....feelin this track.......keep droppen

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Thanks for the feed, shit will be returned and shit

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beat is hard...and so is ur flow


but the "ssssss" in ur vocals kills ur quality on this...imo


nice soundin flow/delivery tho

grimey voice

I liked it


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fuckin soundclick....shits down again

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Definitely feeling the track, maybe its just me but i feel the seconds guys voice more lol he just sounds different. Definitely good track, if it had one more verse it be even better. This a track that grows on u. Props. ~1~

Word, uppppppppppp

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Quality and presence on this track is solid. Both emcees showed up and stood out and didn't try to compete or sound like one another. Not much to say that ain't been said, nice joint.