aiight word. Straight banga yo.

Intro: Triple_N
Hook: Triple_N
First verse: Ca'lam
Second verse: Triple_N
Third verse: SPuL
Outro: Triple_N
Beat: "Lean Back Remix" by Fat Joe ft. Eminem, Lil' jon and Ma$e

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Links:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=218258

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and this:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=218170

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hhmmm yo first off if Id deffinately do a collab with the first nigga rippin dat nigga was Ill...and the seconed nigga..compared to the first and seconed the thrid was outta place...but he added a diff flavor like eminem did ahhahahah....no offense...but umm good shit Return the Favor if u want

SPul was good no doubt but u just didnt fit...

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lol first off i think yall had a lil too much fun with the sound effects
but word

trip the hooks hot
at first i was kinda ehh about it, mainly because im so used to the lean back hook
but i got used to it after awhile, so word

calam i was def feeling
personally i thought you had the best verse on em
overall it jus went well, i loved the flow, delivery everything was real good
lyrics was fine

trip you had a solid verse too
but like i said earlier, the sound effects was a lil over-used.
delivery was a bit different than i thought you was gon come wit, but nonetheless it was coo
lyrics was fine as well

spul fit fine on the track i thought.
if anything set him aside from the others in a bad way it was his quality
calam and trip had crystal clear quality, then spuls was a lil muffled it seemed like
still good, but there was a lil difference from this track compared to your other ones, i unno if suttin went wrong wit mixing or w/e....
but word you had good verse
i liked your delivery, pretty hyped up and shit
lyrics was fine, i really liked flow
pretty solid

overall pretty nice, yall work together well on tracks
just watch them sound effects, lol...
oh and i liked how Abdul came back for a visit there at the end, lol
yall some lucky dudes gettin free slurpees for a week

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Csizzle.- " Am not a chiropracter but i will crack yo knees back..." ooooooooow..lol nice.. flow wise u did ya thang but also not ya nicest shit..

Tfizzle- "Am the king of souf...like thats wus up....but u aint really sayin much.." lol ayo not bad i heard better shit from you...B

Sp-"How u gonna reach my level if yo game been over.." lol aight u changed ya style not bad this fits you..hahaha Outro..lol is that SPULL..lol


Overall nice collab..

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^appreciate feed from all. upppppppppp

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everyones flow was solid.....delivery was solid....lyrics were ok....

i guess im kinda biased against the beat n shit.....its a coo song....

but its just nothing id listen to over or anything...maybe cause ive heard this beat 2394023843533 times...

LMAO @ the outro...

everything was coo with the song...just nothing id download

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Triple N- that was ill for real ya shit was crack i really liked yo part you had a nice flow and a nice delivery

calam- that knee line was nice ya flow was also good I really liked it

Spul- wow you changed ya flow and it was good keep this one lol nice...

this was a good song all flowed nicely a good mix too and it was so good I put it in my ipod no lie lol.

rtf-
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=218654

apreciate feed from both

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this was an ill lil sumin,could see it on a mixtape...Spul up y amic game tho man...next to kids wid sick quality ur mic's faults show up...downloaded n on my ipod...nice

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calam is illl.... thats all

i hate this beat but Trips hook was a beast, alot better than ur verse

LMFAO AT THE INTRO HAHAHAHA

spuls verse was good..... he actually fit really well on the track
Trip had good presence but u didnt need all those effects, some are aight, but it was soundin alil corny by the end

pretty good track, but please use a diff beat next time

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...The real Renegade before Hova...

^aiight word to both for feed. appreciate

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Hook: Pretty nice...but what was wit the jeezy ad libs?

First Verse: Ca'lam, I was really feelin' your presence n' flow...good shit, had good lyrics

Second Verse: N, same as Ca'lam, was feeling your presence n' flow...You got a real good voice for rappin'

Third Verse: I don't know what some of these guys are talkin' about...you fit to me, if anything it was just that your quality wasn't as good as the other guy's. But yea, you had good shit too.

Outro: lmao, funny shit.

General: Brought out a pretty old, n' played beat n' made it hot...Was a dope track overall. 1

^thanks for feed appreciate it son

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