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Old 10-17-05, 02:13 AM   #1
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PreZidict (0-0) vs. Rile1 (0-0)

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Old 10-17-05, 07:39 PM   #2
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Wordness!!!!! I dont think hes gonna show....
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Old 10-18-05, 08:13 PM   #3
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this baish isnt gonna show.... hes got one more day though
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Old 10-20-05, 11:32 AM   #4
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stop talkin shyt son, drop ya verse i gotta vote up on ppl battles
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Old 10-20-05, 11:45 AM   #5
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dont gotta kick this herbs ass, his crack been filled
only reason ya "lifes hair"(here)...
...............is cause u "tracked ya will"!!!


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Old 10-20-05, 07:48 PM   #6
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Strictly Business?? I hope so, that shits a lie, fag, Ill strike and stop heart
how u gonna know about poppin gats, when u can barely even Pop-Tart?

Lmao the punches were due Friday...but ur weak anyways
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Old 10-20-05, 08:23 PM   #7
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V/ PRE

im sorry im just not clicking links in a 1 bar battle
and he had a decent rhyme
 
Old 10-20-05, 09:05 PM   #8
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werd @bout clickin links......

and Rile ya shit wasnt strong, had too much in it, tried a lil too hard...prezidict ya punch wasnt toooo creative but it worked, got straight to da point so

voterezidict
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Old 10-20-05, 09:10 PM   #9
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v/ prezidict

Better punch, wasn't too ill though..
werdplay was kinda simple.
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Old 10-21-05, 12:15 AM   #10
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Voted for PreZidict

Prez, not the best punch from you, the wordplay you used was ok but you forced it which made it lose some of its appeal. The punch was average to me, it wasn't real weak, but at the same time it wasn't that hard at all.

Rile1...first off, nobody is going to click a link in a one bar battle, and the fact that links are played to fuck anyways makes your bar even weaker. The rhyming was ok, the concept of the pop gats/pop-tart was pretty basic, but your main let down was the inclusion of the link.

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Old 10-21-05, 12:31 AM   #11
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v/prez....for overall better punch
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Old 10-21-05, 03:54 AM   #12
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Old 10-21-05, 04:24 AM   #13
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Prezidict or whatever.

yeah, him.
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Old 10-21-05, 10:32 PM   #14
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Old 10-21-05, 11:15 PM   #15
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vote prezidict better punch
 
 


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