check........................................... 10 lines sounds good

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I had to get a new couch, but as you can see the fun continues!

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check...yo i swear i didnt even know these battles were up i would of noshowed if i didnt see the second sign up thread in LL lol...well i know your better then me i barely did punches but good luck

peace

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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2050775
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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2050792

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I had to get a new couch, but as you can see the fun continues!

A.I.

vangos a has been...and thats a fact that he just cant grip
no crews wanted him...thats why he brought back the blueprint
hes not a vet...and trust me, i dont have any spite
says hes the illest freestyler on the net cuz he cant do it in real life
its sad cuz he thinks hes wanted but ofcourse thats not a fact
says "old school is back in the house"...but noone wants him back
vango jerks off to weird shit...his taste in porn is really bitter
he liked the pic in his sig so much he forgot those were his sisters
and hes not a champ...thats the truth, hes just not entitled
cuz noone knew he was in the spotlight...until he put it in his title

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Yo I didn't expect you to have a backbone after I tore out your spinal.
Claiming nobody can pass him, good thing I know how to "Cram" a Final
See I know your a topical cat, so I hope your punches got some passion
Cuz your punches Neverland like adults visiting with Michael Jackson

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vangos a has been...and thats a fact that he just cant grip
no crews wanted him...thats why he brought back the blueprint
hes not a vet...and trust me, i dont have any spite
says hes the illest freestyler on the net cuz he cant do it in real life
its sad cuz he thinks hes wanted but ofcourse thats not a fact
vango jerks off to weird shit...his taste in porn is really bitter
he liked the pic in his sig so much he forgot those were his sisters
and hes not a champ...thats the truth, hes just not entitled
cuz noone knew he was in the spotlight...until he put it in his title

Seriously, final you came NICE. Vango, that tint line was just a joke rhymed so major point loss. Most of it was irrelevant and the set-ups had nothing to do with the punches, but the wordplay in the ones i quoted was coo. final man, once you learn how to flip the punches better into more complex/better worded, you will be fuckin SICK. Serious.

v- final

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this was a REALLY tough battle to choose from, so ima try and do it line by line:
Vango:

Yo I didn't expect you to have a backbone after I tore out your spinal.
Claiming nobody can pass him, good thing I know how to "Cram" a Final
.... good punch, but weak setup in my mind, it was just really random and thrown in there... 6/10
And if you were claiming to be a test, choose something hard like the S.A.T.
Forget about it, I got a better acronym for your test, we'll call it S.A.D.
... lol, it made me laugh actually, good funny personal 7/10
You got things confused, I smoke chronic, while your a chronic masturbator
You were so ugly as a child, the Dr. tinted your windows on your incubator
..... ahhh, ok.. the setup was a better line than the second one.... and "ur so ugly" lines/jokes are played like woah.. 5/10
See I know your a topical cat, so I hope your punches got some passion
Cuz your punches Neverland like adults visiting with Michael Jackson
.... lol, funny punch... and u had some personal.... 8/10
This battle was over before it started, but Final please don't hold a grudge
No need for votes, i removed your feeding tube, like a Supreme Court Judge
..... stupid ass closer... and ahhh, yup, stupid.... any other line woulda been 10 times better than this one.. major downturn with the last bar... 5/10
31/50 61%

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vangos a has been...and thats a fact that he just cant grip
no crews wanted him...thats why he brought back the blueprint
... ok personal, atleast ur attackin him with stuff about him unlike vango.. 7/10
hes not a vet...and trust me, i dont have any spite
says hes the illest freestyler on the net cuz he cant do it in real life
decent personal punch, but it wasnt that hard hittin... 5/10
its sad cuz he thinks hes wanted but ofcourse thats not a fact
says "old school is back in the house"...but noone wants him back
LOL..... funny personal and punch.... its good that u take every bar to actually attack ur opponent unlike Vango who sed more so jokes and shit... 7/10
vango jerks off to weird shit...his taste in porn is really bitter
he liked the pic in his sig so much he forgot those were his sisters
.... aight, decent personal, but i wasnt fully feelin it, but i know wat ur sayin. 5/10
and hes not a champ...thats the truth, hes just not entitled
cuz noone knew he was in the spotlight...until he put it in his title
DAMN..... nice closer compared to Vango... real nice.. real decent verse from a topical person... 8/10
32/50 64%

damn close ass battle..... wat really lost it for vango was the tinted window line was ehhh, and his closer was pretty stupid in my mind.... good job to both of u.... the precentages do not lie....

V/final

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Vango

Yo I didn't expect you to have a backbone after I tore out your spinal.
Claiming nobody can pass him, good thing I know how to "Cram" a Final
good
And if you were claiming to be a test, choose something hard like the S.A.T.
Forget about it, I got a better acronym for your test, we'll call it S.A.D.
eh..
You got things confused, I smoke chronic, while your a chronic masturbator
You were so ugly as a child, the Dr. tinted your windows on your incubator
seem like a joke you'd say verbally
See I know your a topical cat, so I hope your punches got some passion
Cuz your punches Neverland like adults visiting with Michael Jackson
soooooooooooooooooooo playedddddddddddddddddddddd
This battle was over before it started, but Final please don't hold a grudge
No need for votes, i removed your feeding tube, like a Supreme Court Judge
aiight

Final

vangos a has been...and thats a fact that he just cant grip
no crews wanted him...thats why he brought back the blueprint
haha
hes not a vet...and trust me, i dont have any spite
says hes the illest freestyler on the net cuz he cant do it in real life
good
its sad cuz he thinks hes wanted but ofcourse thats not a fact
says "old school is back in the house"...but noone wants him back
nope
vango jerks off to weird shit...his taste in porn is really bitter
he liked the pic in his sig so much he forgot those were his sisters
damn...
and hes not a champ...thats the truth, hes just not entitled
cuz noone knew he was in the spotlight...until he put it in his title
ahahaha

Vote - Final

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Vango:

Nothing

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final:

its sad cuz he thinks hes wanted but ofcourse thats not a fact
says "old school is back in the house"...but noone wants him back
vango jerks off to weird shit...his taste in porn is really bitter
he liked the pic in his sig so much he forgot those were his sisters
and hes not a champ...thats the truth, hes just not entitled
cuz noone knew he was in the spotlight...until he put it in his title

word. final came pretty nice here. not bad. vango had nothing really.
nice shit final.

v/ final

haha, this was a pretty funny battle, had me laughing

vango...meh, nothing really special, had a couple lines in there that stood out, but mostly everything was weak and dull, think you're a bit rusty or sump....some stuff was worded poorly too,, but overall, it was decent

Yo I didn't expect you to have a backbone after I tore out your spinal.
Claiming nobody can pass him, good thing I know how to "Cram" a Final
See I know your a topical cat, so I hope your punches got some passion
Cuz your punches Neverland like adults visiting with Michael Jackson

final....haha, wow, surprized me here....saying your shitty and what not....came out with some funny/hard personals, wow....good stuff man, i think if you get better wordplay happening, you could be a force, cause you got some creative and good shit there....word, thought you came harder and edged this one out

hes not a vet...and trust me, i dont have any spite
says hes the illest freestyler on the net cuz he cant do it in real life
vango jerks off to weird shit...his taste in porn is really bitter
he liked the pic in his sig so much he forgot those were his sisters

just the lines i laughed at the most, closer was fire too

v/final

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