checkin in..... i say 8-12 lines for the battle..... sound good?

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...The real Renegade before Hova...

presently present.....8-12linez is fine man...GL...out

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yea...... i got some major writers block right now.... so ill just try this shit right now

Acuity's rhyme skill is inconclusive, he's losin abusively
ur text is obtrusively wack, and ur rep is "Elusiv G"
yet to be found, but you say u hit the targets, dont jock me!
only possible if ur straight ass, from pinnin the tail on the donkey
Lyrically battered and beaten, ur old sig was fat from all of ur feedin
ill beat him and "chew him up", cuz even his Avvy says he was "E10" (eaten)
your style is plain, tryna spit fire but Acuity mayne, i'm deflectin your aim
You bring as much heat to the game as the first two letters of ur name ("Ac"uity)

..... yea, im drawin totally blank again..lol, pc... and if u dont get any of my punches, dont vote and pm me....
- Acuity = accuracy and precision.... and also clearness of vision too
- Elusiv G is his alias

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...The real Renegade before Hova...

Lyrically battered and beaten, ur old sig was fat from all of ur feedin
ill beat him and "chew him up", cuz even his Avvy says he was "E10" (eaten)
your style is plain, tryna spit fire but Acuity mayne, i'm deflectin your aim
You bring as much heat to the game as the first two letters of ur name ("Ac"uity)

vs

Your supposed to be tight on the mic, but u aint entered into the Spring tournament
Only signing up to post votes on the fights, and for sum reason you insist your a vet?

yea i think fux got this one...i liked those 2 bars, acuity most of your lines i werent really feelin the closest was the bar i put though no hate...but yea i think fux got this basically for harder punches and they were more creative, good personals

vote=fux

peace

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Overall this battle was not all that great yall had somegood punches here and there i just think fux's hit harder as in a lil more creative not as playedbut like i said thiswas pretty even battle

your style is plain, tryna spit fire but Acuity mayne, i'm deflectin your aim
You bring as much heat to the game as the first two letters of ur name
^BEST punch of the battle

Vote- Fux

yo....how come i cant edit my checkin in with my votes????

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...The real Renegade before Hova...

AC

On a daily basis, leaving FuxJustAWord famished, believe im the sickest
Im the greatest, its established, after this his mama be making cemetery visits
nope
U got an aight record in text, u took that to mean u got skills I guess?
Strange ur audio such a mess, like when sum1 puts da mic in ur hand.. u bcom perplexed
nope
You for some reason think your one of RV's real vets...9th degree keeps owning ur ass
With skills, fukjustaword aint blessed...he'll get broke like glass cos he ouuta his class
weak
Your supposed to be tight on the mic, but u aint entered into the Spring tournament
Only signing up to post votes on the fights, and for sum reason you insist your a vet?
weak
I look at Fux and i smile an laugh, as i kick him to the kerb, he can feel tha pump
his skills are negative on the graph, what a herb, ive easily merked this chump
nope

Fux

Acuity's rhyme skill is inconclusive, he's losin abusively
ur text is obtrusively wack, and ur rep is "Elusiv G"
eh..
yet to be found, but you say u hit the targets, dont jock me!
only possible if ur straight ass, from pinnin the tail on the donkey
ok
Lyrically battered and beaten, ur old sig was fat from all of ur feedin
ill beat him and "chew him up", cuz even his Avvy says he was "E10" (eaten)
eh...
your style is plain, tryna spit fire but Acuity mayne, i'm deflectin your aim
You bring as much heat to the game as the first two letters of ur name ("Ac"uity)
damn..

Vote = Fux

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how come some people can edit their shit but i can't??? w/e

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=182813
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=182823
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=182811

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...The real Renegade before Hova...

yeah, this wasn't bad.....thought fux took this one, mainly because he stayed more consistent, and his last two bars flowed/connected nicely and really hit hard...i thought acuity, you didnt come that bad, but alot of your stuff was weak, or it didnt have good set ups, and alot of shit seemed strected/forced....but you had some good ideas in there, but i think they coulda been harder with better wordplay and set-ups......so not a bad battle, just thought fux came harder and had harder punches/personals

v/fux

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the ac line was ok.... i used a ac line this week too

lokl the donkey line way straight

the other kid came with pure absolute garbage

v/ fux

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