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10 bitch

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1701689

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1701692

Checkin' in...u beat me?....u must be dillusional...lmfao


http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=157342

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i unno man........... he might do it.....

Freepost in here again and you will be suspended for a week

-iky

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...The real Renegade before Hova...

his swings for the fences to no avail, so hes forced to start bunting
triple N eh? never wins, shows newbish qualities, and is just nothing
whoop your ass *lol* we know im beating you, but how badly?
REAL BAD
when my opponents punches are just random letters like his avy
how hes the champ? is this a joke?
these are just some of the questions the whole board want to know
kid put breathe in his sig, its the only time hell have a fabolous video
now hes the master of punchlines? it gets worse
he lacks........
personals, flow, style ,structure,
intelligence, punches directed at his oppoent,
finesse, composure, comprehension
the list could continue, but it would fill up my whole verse
you were spared last week by god, but now hes acting all hsyterical
but two weeks in a row Triple N would need more than a myrical

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=156117
This personal will never die^^^^^^^^^^^^^^




He is a bigger collection of useless lard than liposuction waste bins
But he's always posts happy cuz when he sits down his stomach grins(belly rolls)
This fat version of clark kent clearly let himself go so he pawned his cape
It use to glide in the wind..now its like suicidal inmates, it can't take da wait(weight)
He can't move so he stays online all day lookin' for miricale diet to appear
Dats why he always posts "a-head" cuz he ain't seen his body in years
Ya structure's legacy's like ya weight gain...it leaves a stretched mark
SDizzle stands for Steak & Donuts, yellow color in user title reps his farts
Don't wine at me like u did soco sayin' " all fat jokes are played & wack"
Cuz played means no longer relevant...and guess what?....your still fat!!!

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Yes I edited it becuz for some reason when I posted it every line crowded around the link I provided an it was unreadable....so hopefully I don't get DQed but goodluck to S Dizzle

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sdizzle

his swings for the fences to no avail, so hes forced to start bunting
triple N eh? never wins, shows newbish qualities, and is just nothing
ery1 trys it...no
whoop your ass *lol* we know im beating you, but how badly?
REAL BAD
when my opponents punches are just random letters like his avy
nice
how hes the champ? is this a joke?
these are just some of the questions the whole board want to know
kid put breathe in his sig, its the only time hell have a fabolous video
decent
now hes the master of punchlines? it gets worse
he lacks........
personals, flow, style ,structure,
intelligence, punches directed at his oppoent,
finesse, composure, comprehension
the list could continue, but it would fill up my whole verse
funny but no
you were spared last week by god, but now hes acting all hsyterical
but two weeks in a row Triple N would need more than a myrical
nope

Triple N

He is a bigger collection of useless lard than liposuction waste bins
But he's always posts happy cuz when he sits down his stomach grins(belly rolls)
ok
This fat version of clark kent clearly let himself go so he pawned his cape
It use to glide in the wind..now its like suicidal inmates, it can't take da wait(weight)
ok
He can't move so he stays online all day lookin' for miricale diet to appear
Dats why he always posts "a-head" cuz he ain't seen his body in years
decent
Ya structure's legacy's like ya weight gain...it leaves a stretched mark
SDizzle stands for Steak & Donuts, yellow color in user title reps his farts
no!
Don't wine at me like u did soco sayin' " all fat jokes are played & wack"
Cuz played means no longer relevant...and guess what?....your still fat!!!
ok but bored with it

V/ dizzle

Okay Triple...u went at him being fat the whole time...it got boring after the 1st bar...gotta go at him from other concepts to win...dizzle came witty in places...

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That Old School Mother Fucker

Aint That A Bitch?

Crhyme Sindicate

Damn I knew if I came half ass this^^^^would happen...same shit every battle, I shoulda listened to my fist mind.

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well check this this is an honest vote

Sdizzle Your shit was ill i was feelin it...i dont like that structure though and you had some OK vocab..wordplay was nice...personals...ok.....punches was dope......meta's decent...this shit was aiight fam...i thought this shit was a lil above average.....

triple: I gave this win to you Because Your personal and Your Opener..the stomache grin line was dope....that shit boht had me crackin up so i gave this too you because you came much harder ....your shit was nice...punches hit em hard...personal DOPE...metas decent.....wordplay nice....vocab..ok


Vote: Triple N

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UPPING lol .

ok.. can i just say.

SDIZZLE BEING FAT PUNCHES ARE PLAYED

we've been through it, and heard all the dizzle punches there is... they were funny the first time.. but not anymore..


dizzle came alright, some blah shit.. some alright shit...

triple N based his concepts on dizzle being fat, although he had other shit.. i didnt feel it much..


v/dizzle

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aight,
dizzle, first off--good verse, but the sturcture coulda definitely used some improvement.....i didnt really find anythin outstandin, but u had good vocab...along wit decent personals n punches the whole way thru, so u had good consistency...

Triple, ya verse was straight too...structure was good, but...the fat jokes got REAL old...especially since i've seen A LOT against sdizzle...i mean shit, u had good consistency, but in my eyes, u were jus sayin "you're fat" "you're fat" wit each bar...it was aight wit the first bar or two, but then it got real played...

V/ sdizzle...