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Old 08-13-06, 10:10 PM   #1
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Group D: NRG (0-0) vs Malicious (1-1)

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If you showed last week, good.. I'm proud of you. But if you no-showed and were given a second chance DON'T fuck it up. Cause you'll be out. Some have moved up to 2-0 and are looking strong, while some are slumping at 0-2. Whatever the record.. it doesnt clinch anything. You still gotta go at you opponents and take their heads off. This week I want to see everyone show up AND vote. A couple battles had two losers last week due to not voting and leaving links. I'm not hunting for links so post em up or I'm DQing you. Show me somethin this week..

Battler #1: Malicious
Battler #2: NRG

Battles go up Sunday night
Battler #1 drops 1 bar due Wednesday night (11:59 pm ET)
Battler #2 drops 2 bars due Thursday night (11:59 pm ET)
Battler #1 drops 1 bar due Friday night (11:59 pm ET)
5 Links in check-in due Sunday afternoon (6:30 pm ET)

Here are a few rules that you SHOULD know already but if not, now you do:
- Feeding IS allowed. Each person will have the chance to feed if they want to. You will not be penalized for feeding.
- If you sway, you WILL be DQ'ed. There are no second chances.. sway and lose. Don't do it and you wont be DQ'ed
- Voting rules are being enforced. If you dont leave links you'll lose. Even if it's a no show win, if you dont leave links.. you lose.
- If you havent read the rules yet, do it now as there are alot of updates.
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Old 08-14-06, 06:18 AM   #2
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In Here Hoes...
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Old 08-14-06, 12:36 PM   #3
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I'm In this....
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Old 08-14-06, 01:27 PM   #4
Malicious
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Your wack son, so put on yo shoes and run, your career is through
But Fuck That shoe, thats just what 90% of this site just wishs you'd do
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Old 08-15-06, 01:00 AM   #5
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you aint respected, so ya think your poundin for a slaughter?
bitch you only came with fire so i could drown u in the water
your face'll be fuckin floored, u beat be? how do you figure, damn
cuz you bein in my shoes will only make ya feel like a bigger man
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Old 08-15-06, 09:38 AM   #6
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C'mon kid we all know u suck And who's da bigger man, I Rhyme
And i'd admire both of your concepts, if I had'nt used em a dozen times
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Old 08-15-06, 11:26 AM   #7
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Malicious

Your wack son, so put on yo shoes and run, your career is through
But Fuck That shoe, thats just what 90% of this site just wishs you'd do
lol this was a nice solid punch.
C'mon kid we all know u suck And who's da bigger man, I Rhyme
And i'd admire both of your concepts, if I had'nt used em a dozen times
lmfao another nice solid punch, best one in the battle so far.


NRG

you aint respected, so ya think your poundin for a slaughter?
bitch you only came with fire so i could drown u in the water
This was a pretty weak punch.
your face'll be fuckin floored, u beat be? how do you figure, damn
cuz you bein in my shoes will only make ya feel like a bigger man
This was a nice punch.

Overall - I feel that Malicious took this battle. His two punches were harder then both of NRG's two punches. NRG the first punch you had was pretty weak, but you picked it up with your second punch, so he got you with more consistancy also.

V.Malicious
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Old 08-15-06, 12:37 PM   #8
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Malicious

Your wack son, so put on yo shoes and run, your career is through
But Fuck That shoe, thats just what 90% of this site just wishs you'd do
ok punch
C'mon kid we all know u suck And who's da bigger man, I Rhyme
And i'd admire both of your concepts, if I had'nt used em a dozen times
weak

NRG

you aint respected, so ya think your poundin for a slaughter?
bitch you only came with fire so i could drown u in the water
weak
your face'll be fuckin floored, u beat be? how do you figure, damn
cuz you bein in my shoes will only make ya feel like a bigger man
in my opinion, best punch of the battle but your wording sucks

Basically... Both had one good line and one bad line. Maliciouse's first punch was ok but after reading it again it just doesnt hit hard enough to be a punch you'd base a win on. NRG came really weak with the water and fire line but the 2nd punch was a really good feed from Maliciouse's 1st concept. That made it hit harder so I have to give my vote to NRG for the last line... return the favore in my current battle once the last verse is dropped from my opponent. thanx

V/NRG


Overall - I feel that Malicious took this battle. His two punches were harder then both of NRG's two punches. NRG the first punch you had was pretty weak, but you picked it up with your second punch, so he got you with more consistancy also.
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Old 08-15-06, 12:39 PM   #9
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sorry bout that last part on my post...lol...I copied and pasted wytes voting format to break the shit down. just disregard the last part thats not in bold letters.
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Old 08-15-06, 01:33 PM   #10
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Malicious

Your wack son, so put on yo shoes and run, your career is through
But Fuck That shoe, thats just what 90% of this site just wishs you'd do
heard shit like this..... ok
C'mon kid we all know u suck And who's da bigger man, I Rhyme
And i'd admire both of your concepts, if I had'nt used em a dozen times
this punch would have been good if u had sed somethin about u usin that concept a dozen times in like 2003...... u just kinda diss urself the way its worded now

NRG

you aint respected, so ya think your poundin for a slaughter?
bitch you only came with fire so i could drown u in the water
This was a pretty weak punch.
your face'll be fuckin floored, u beat be? how do you figure, damn
cuz you bein in my shoes will only make ya feel like a bigger man
best punch of the battle, but it really isnt sayin much either

Overall - I think Mal woulda taken this easily if he had just worded his last punch better, but as it stands the battle was real close, and i think NRG took it for a decent second punch.....

V/NRG
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Old 08-15-06, 01:40 PM   #11
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Your wack son, so put on yo shoes and run, your career is through
But Fuck That shoe, thats just what 90% of this site just wishs you'd do

^ that was bad. poor punch with choppy flow

you aint respected, so ya think your poundin for a slaughter?
bitch you only came with fire so i could drown u in the water

^alright.. not really funny but ok..

your face'll be fuckin floored, u beat be? how do you figure, damn
cuz you bein in my shoes will only make ya feel like a bigger man

^ haha, made me smile.. alright punch with mediocre metaphor

C'mon kid we all know u suck And who's da bigger man, I Rhyme
And i'd admire both of your concepts, if I had'nt used em a dozen times

^ why would you use his poor concepts a dozen times?

vote/// NRG for slightly harder punches and wittier wordplay.
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Old 08-15-06, 07:55 PM   #12
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Malicious

Your wack son, so put on yo shoes and run, your career is through
But Fuck That shoe, thats just what 90% of this site just wishs you'd do


lame and played

C'mon kid we all know u suck And who's da bigger man, I Rhyme
And i'd admire both of your concepts, if I had'nt used em a dozen times


sort of played..but it was ok

NRG

you aint respected, so ya think your poundin for a slaughter?
bitch you only came with fire so i could drown u in the water


stupid

your face'll be fuckin floored, u beat be? how do you figure, damn
cuz you bein in my shoes will only make ya feel like a bigger man

decent punch, good flip

Overall - weak punches...i've gotta give my vote to the dude who had atleast something decent, as well as it being a fairly decent attempt at feeding
v. nrg
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Old 08-17-06, 06:46 PM   #13
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Malicious

Your wack son, so put on yo shoes and run, your career is through
But Fuck That shoe, thats just what 90% of this site just wishs you'd do
^^wack, this was elementary at best. Really!
C'mon kid we all know u suck And who's da bigger man, I Rhyme
And i'd admire both of your concepts, if I had'nt used em a dozen times
^^this was ok, i mean it still seemed rushed and slightly played but i guess its ok

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NRG

you aint respected, so ya think your poundin for a slaughter?
bitch you only came with fire so i could drown u in the water
^^this was ok, wasnt feelin it much tho
your face'll be fuckin floored, u beat be? how do you figure, damn
cuz you bein in my shoes will only make ya feel like a bigger man
^^best bar of the battle, which honestly isnt saying much as ive seen this concept a million times.


NRG won this battle with his 2nd bar. Plain and simple, i think mal took his opponent too easy and dropped weak.


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Old 08-18-06, 11:34 AM   #14
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Your wack son, so put on yo shoes and run, your career is through
But Fuck That shoe, thats just what 90% of this site just wishs you'd do
WORDING IS NOT GOOD SO THE PUNCH DOESNT HIT
C'mon kid we all know u suck And who's da bigger man, I Rhyme
And i'd admire both of your concepts, if I had'nt used em a dozen times
THE PUNCH WAS OK BUT YOU COULDVE DID SO MUCH MORE LOL

NRG

you aint respected, so ya think your poundin for a slaughter?
bitch you only came with fire so i could drown u in the water
OH MAN THIS IS PRETTY WEAK, MATCHES MALS 1ST PUNCH
your face'll be fuckin floored, u beat be? how do you figure, damn
cuz you bein in my shoes will only make ya feel like a bigger man
DECENT HERE

I GOTTA GO WITH NRG FOR THE LAST PUNCH
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Old 08-18-06, 04:56 PM   #15
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malic... your shoe punch i've seen many b4... n ya second's concept was done dozens b4.... step it up fam... really


nrg... ya first punch sucked doggy dick... really

ya second punch was a decent feed.. n was basically the best punch of the battle


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