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Old 05-21-05, 06:32 PM   #1
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Lyrics Put MCs On Atkin's Diet!
 
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My Muthafuckin Mind Is A Pit...Filled 2 Da Tip...Wit Saliva & Spit
No One Raps Harder Than Him.......You Niggas Softer Than Shit!
Fuck Costs, Each Thought Pays Off.....Latex Body, Rubber-Cloth
Imaginary, You Cant Invision Me...White Wings, Call Me A Moth!
Rap To A Beat In My Dome, 'Dogs-Wine'...I Make 'Bitches Moan'
Sit On This Priceless Throne...'Tossin Weight' Like Muscle Bones
Slim Jim Trust Me, My Beef Is LONG.....People Repeat My Songs
I'm Hea, So Poof! You Gone...Tuck In Ass Like Bedtime Thongs!
Come At Me Wrong? Grew Up Hood Smart........You A Hood Tart
Never Takin Niggas 'Dicks Out Ya Cheeks'.....Til Da 'Cock-Farts'!
Rite Pop Tarts!, & Stop Hearts...From 'Beatin'....Now Its Irregular
Beggin Ya?, I'll 'Hustle' Ya Life...So Ringtone & I'ma 'CELL-ULar'
Stupid Faggets My Rhymes A Weapon.......Short Shots Deflectin
YES I'ma Keep On 'Hypin Bill'.......Like Clinton High In Elections!
Fuck Usher, This Year.......My Whole Verse Speaks Confessions
Filled Wit Lessons, In Dis Thread......Til Ya Learnins Congested!
Problems In Shootin? I Have None....Gat Lines Dont Need Guns
Propane Shots In Da Ass..Have Hemroids Fall Out Ya Ear-Drum!
Hear Dat Shit Hit Da Ground...Fat Stomachs, I'd Tuck Em In Now
Read This Out Loud....
"ACKRITES A BEAST, & I'M A FUCKIN CLOWN!"

Now Take A Bow...




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Slashin Armada With Tha Pen I Write Wit...Paybacks This Herbs Plan
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Old 05-21-05, 06:52 PM   #2
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DAMN that structure ws fuckin impressive....fuckin perfect lol....oh yeah theverse was sick to....loved yur wordplay like always...come to OG...you know you want me...
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Old 05-21-05, 06:59 PM   #3
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I thought this was a creative piece.

my favorite lines were:
Come At Me Wrong? Grew Up Hood Smart........You A Hood Tart
Never Takin Niggas 'Dicks Out Ya Cheeks'.....Til Da 'Cock-Farts'!
Rite Pop Tarts!, & Stop Hearts...From 'Beatin'....Now Its Irregular
Beggin Ya?, I'll 'Hustle' Ya Life...So Ringtone & I'ma 'CELL-ULar'

P.S. Ackrite who's the person in your avy...................?
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Old 05-21-05, 07:04 PM   #4
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Old 05-21-05, 07:05 PM   #5
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nice look, you look familiar................,.........
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Old 05-21-05, 07:06 PM   #6
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He looks like Omarion...Dope Piece u got a future in RV Text.
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Old 05-21-05, 07:08 PM   #7
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he look wayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy wayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy better than Omarion...
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Old 05-21-05, 07:11 PM   #8
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Aha @ Lady.........Good Lookin Ma Lemme See You Namean

Good Lookin @ Motif.......Its Much Appreciated Son
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Old 05-21-05, 07:18 PM   #9
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first page of members mugshots, i think you responded to my pics thread already...
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Old 05-21-05, 08:11 PM   #10
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Damn Fareal??.........Well Imma Make Sure I Go Peep You Again..........When You On Get At Me On Aim

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Old 05-22-05, 09:43 PM   #11
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AEYO............Whats Good.............No More Replies??? $cream At Dis Shit
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Old 05-23-05, 08:35 AM   #12
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structure was flawless as usual.....you came real creative in this piece, nice usage of vocab to.....keep dropping your stuff.........
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Old 05-23-05, 09:04 PM   #13
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Dude Offers Hand Jobs For Votes..Ask 187, He knows It FIRST HAND!

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Old 05-23-05, 09:13 PM   #14
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That Was Pretty hot nice structure n nice rhyme scheme!pretty nice azz piece!rtf in my collab
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Old 05-23-05, 09:34 PM   #15
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Ayo nice drop....no hate.........keep doin ya thang da verse was off da chain hope u come up with more OM's
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