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09-25-05, 04:20 PM
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Intermental - "My Dream" (dope track)
IP: 6AC2 FE66
www.soundclick.com/intermental
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=209553 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=209515 Therse the links I fed on, top track WWW.SOUNDCLICK.COM/INTERMENTAL MY DREAM HOLLA AT DUDE
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09-25-05, 04:25 PM
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IP: A490 C9BD
Listenin While Typing.............Good Beat- I think i tried that beat Nice Flow good lyrics nice deep track you should put ya lyrics up cause i cant hear all ya said lol...overall real nice track
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09-25-05, 04:26 PM
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IP: 1ADC A69C
I actually didn't like the beat...but I like how you upped ur rhyme scheme early on in ur flow...nice internals there...flow was decent to good
ur delivery for this type of song was good...ur style isn't overly amped...but it isn't as ladi back as say, Biggie...u got ya own thing overall, not bad dawg 1 |
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09-25-05, 04:56 PM
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One Mic
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IP: F7D9 325C
yer nice track. i wasn't feelin the beat 2much either, although you hit alot harder lyrically in this track, then a lot of your other tracks, which is gud. had a better flow aswell. 8/10
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09-25-05, 05:05 PM
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IP: B7CA 2C26
thanks yall personally I loved this beat but I apreciate the feed
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09-25-05, 06:00 PM
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WhoAreYou?
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IP: A181 D033
yo wassup mayn
yeh i was feeling this song lyrically.....as Q said your style's not too laid back but not too like abrasive if you know what i mean good drop mayn ~peace~ |
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09-25-05, 06:01 PM
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IP: B7CA 2C26
Yeah Im feelin that thanks......
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09-25-05, 10:37 PM
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Light Weight
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IP: 9F2C 978B
nice nice... nice
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09-26-05, 01:56 PM
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IP: 7444 D3CD
^^^Thanks for goin in depth...but at least you listend to it
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09-26-05, 02:47 PM
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IP: 1F19 D2B9
the beat you used was kinda wierd but its not bad. your hook is pretty good actually. flow is not bad the first verse it was wierd and sketchy but it pciekd up in the 2nd through out. emotion aint to bad could use a bit of work but your commin along nice man. maybe turn your vocals down a bit though. but overall nice lil track. 1
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09-26-05, 05:10 PM
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IP: 2A9E 422C
thanks upppin..........
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09-26-05, 05:28 PM
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Under Oath
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IP: 4540 25A9
^^^^^^^^^^^Good Shit man................................
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09-26-05, 05:34 PM
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IP: 2A9E 422C
Thanks.............
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09-27-05, 02:14 PM
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IP: 178A C105
uppppin..................
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09-27-05, 04:25 PM
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IP: B6D6 F84D
beat is boring
not feeln the voice at all flow and everything is very sloppy delivery and everything needs a lot of work not a fun track to listen to lyrics not too good, but its hard to listen when its not fun to listen too naw mean 3/10
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