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10-15-05, 03:08 PM
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Speats and Intermental - Hocus Pocus Part II (Hahaha, u know we had to do it again)
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Haha, me and Speats hit it again. The Part II to the hit version "Hocus Pocus" Yall loved it so much we had to do another one, so here it is, Speats on 1st, Inter on 2nd, Speats on the hook
www.soundclick.com/intermental "Hocus Pocus Part II" Inters link: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=211627 Speats Link: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=211585
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10-15-05, 03:12 PM
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Nt Your Average
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Listenin...Weird Beat But Dope....Diffrent good flow lil choppy but speats is nice on this good delivery
Inter: Good Flow,Its Weird as fuck this beat cant get over it lol nice delivery good shit overall an oh did i mention i LOVE HTIS WEIRD AS FUCK BEATS
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10-15-05, 03:15 PM
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IP: 92CC 07B0
Lol thankls..........
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10-15-05, 03:16 PM
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I'ma Royal
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okay listening.....
intro is kl...sounds like ur both in same room.... speats part: kl...samekind like u did before....this was almoust same kind like first 1 inters part: sounds professional.niceee....like that flow......ur keeping ur style too whole song was kl.....when #3 s coming? this was kl fo real......
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10-15-05, 03:17 PM
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Hell yeah
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number 3 will be dope too haha weird
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10-15-05, 03:18 PM
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I apreciate that dawg.....im tryin to establish a style I think its workin
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10-15-05, 03:51 PM
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IP: 92CC 07B0
upppin.................
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10-15-05, 06:49 PM
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Evolution
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iitel...
intro is kool....speats.. i like you lol u jus need more emotion in ya tracks,... sound angry maan.. u'll sound alot better... flow is kool lyrics are pretty good... like your verse.. adlibs are ite.. hook could be more uplifting.. its the same as the verse... u should double over ya voclas for that inter... iite.. emoion is iite could be better tho... flow is kool... lyrics are straight man yeeh overall its a pretty nmice track jus work on your emotions and delivery... keep droppin em, |
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10-15-05, 06:51 PM
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IP: 20B1 C850
I apreciate that...................
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10-15-05, 07:54 PM
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Listening...
Beat is different I like it... Speats...quality is lackin...flow is decent...flow is choppy sorda...dubs are nice...I like the hook... Inter...Flow is good...quality is pretty good, good delivery... Overall pretty good track...keep it up... |
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10-15-05, 08:33 PM
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20/20 VisioN
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not feeln beat, u need emotion, u just talkn no enegery
flow needs alot of work sounds robotic not natural lyrics seem lame chorus is a good idea, but doesnt sound right up the beat volume 2nd person sounds like a chick lol Quality is worse than 1st dude flow also bad, lyrics nothing worth remebering not a fun track to listen too Just practice more i guess 3/10
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10-15-05, 08:47 PM
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upppin...........
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10-16-05, 12:38 AM
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Hell yeah
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thanks 20 grand really apreciate it.... (sarcarsme)
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10-16-05, 01:06 AM
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I'm Back HOEBAG
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alright peepin it up now...
that beats decent..... speats you did decent...ya flow was not as it usually is....like it dont fit this kinda beat...but its straight.....ya lyrics are ehh..not really there but there decent....the hook is good but it needs a little more work its not too shabby at that part.....2nd person ya flow is decent....ya lyrics are ehh soo soo....ya flows what keeps u alive....but yeah this tracks overrall decent....6/10 rtf - http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=211670
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10-16-05, 04:46 AM
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I apreciate it J, I will rtf as soon as I come back home tonite
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