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11-26-04, 01:21 PM | #31 | ||||
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uppin -1-
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11-26-04, 01:38 PM | #32 | ||||||||
mess with me get cooked
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Eyes burning with hatred like acid cos vision rates red…
Research last kiss in diary and cry at what the date said… -THAT WAS AN GOOD OPENER U EXPRESSED CHA FEELINGS NICE Pupil’s Iris locked on to my wrist as the minutes pass away… Digesting the bottles contents when used to be glass a day… - NICE WORDPLAY HERE GODO EMOTIONAL BAR Constantly parked parallel to entrance of house in question… Watching in dismay at their new found loving contention… -O AIIIIGHT IAM FEELING THIS PART GOOD VOCAB AND FEELIGNS W/ EMOTIONAL Set my heart on opposite gender resulting in an organ collapse… Spirit fall like leaves when the branches reach autumn relax… -WHOA~! NICE WORDPLAY MAYNE Consciously view his scaled lips coress her almost perfect skin… Used to be my position now its his arms that shes lost within… -O AIIIIIGHT IAM FEELING THIS PART GOOD EXPRESSION EVERY LIL DETAIL Stay still, stationary trying to hold my head with elevation… Fingers clamped to my palm stopping blood from circulation… - SO THIS DA PART WHERE U GET HEATED, NICE EXPRESSION Feel frustration the anger build inside these unknown places… Uncovered ground bringing me to these un-a-tone phases…. -NICE GOOD WORDPLAY, Hate to feel this way, let jealousy control my inner emotion… Flash backs of the night I found cracks in her sinning devotion… - WORD NICE VOCAB Erosion of belief and trust, I had it close but lost for lust… This girls a must, but left my surroundings in a cloud of dust… -GOOD EMOTION. GOOD FEELINGS U EXPRESSED HERE Although I’m hurt inside with love and hate about to collide… The feelings I store within won’t drift aside like the ocean tide… -WHOA NICE META GOOD WORDPLAY TO GO WITH IT Can’t stand and watch a family where the fences withstand me… Human traffic with one route but no one will understand me… -O AIIIIIIIIGHT NICE MAYNE …………………………………………†¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦............... With the sun pulled to the ground, only darkness not a sound… He leaves the premises reminisce on that moment n wot I found… As I see that red mist I cross from sanity to prison bound… View the corpse on the floor beaten round a vision on ground… -O DAMN NICE FLOW GOOD VOCAB HERE MAYNE Then it hit harder than anything to ever enter my intellect… If I love her so much, why did I choose to live in~regret… - TRUE GOOD CLOSA NICE AIIIIIGHT PREM- U HAD FLOW, GOOD EMOTION BEING ESTABLISH IN THIS PIECE HERE, GOOD VOCAB, GOOD META'Z, AND WORDPLAYS, THE FEELINGS U EXPLAIN EVERY LIL DETAIL THATS WHAT I MOST LIKE ABOUT THIS OM...........WORD
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11-27-04, 05:11 AM | #33 | ||||
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11-28-04, 08:21 AM | #34 | ||||
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11-28-04, 10:34 AM | #35 | ||||||||
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Battle stats 3-0 KO'S Weedex Terror 2005 Wreckk KINGDIPSET- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162918 WRECKK http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162997 Reppinn...................Retro-Bution................. |
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11-28-04, 10:40 AM | #36 | |||||
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Ill drop best one I saw the whole time I was here. I like ur style.
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11-28-04, 11:55 AM | #37 | ||||||||
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thats a mutha fukken hott piece u played that shyt out man keep em comin i cant fiund shyt wrong with it so w/e man call an agent or suttin u dunno hit me up tho im new so lemme know whats good http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162583
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Battle stats 3-0 KO'S Weedex Terror 2005 Wreckk KINGDIPSET- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162918 WRECKK http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162997 Reppinn...................Retro-Bution................. |
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02-16-05, 03:33 PM | #38 | ||||
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still uppin
lol ........................
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02-16-05, 03:48 PM | #39 | ||||
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Damn yo,I was caught into it just lookin at the opener fam.
The opener alone is something that could be quoted on a daily bases. The content was deep and Ironically Talib Kweli quality. I just found the biggest respect from you,by reading this. This WILL be hall of famed.Get @ me on AIM NOW!
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06-23-05, 05:17 PM | #40 | |||||||
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theres only one word i can really use to describe that piece......FLAWLESS...10/10
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